It’s a really interesting story, I’m surprised that it doesn’t catch a lot of people’s attention..
The plot looks good too, and characters looks exciting too, keep writing , author
I like the Mc. How he's not so typical. Like usually they are mostly dumb or not just the brightest and have to rely on side characters more often. I like that there isnt any unnecessary harem but a little romance wouldn't hurt either. The Mc name is also good. Reminds of me of a red haired guy from an anime
i read 8 chaps and now i could tell that this is going to be a good story.
especially the meeting between the mc and tbe demon.
the author has a good writing style, the story is interesting, the mc is likable so yeah , read it
yo, author here... I don't know how many are reading this novel of mine, but if you're reading this message of mine, I just want to say, thank you for all those who spend a little bit of there time to give someone like mine work a try... and I promise that I will give you one of the best storys ever... again thank you....
Idea of the story is intriguing but the English really diminishes the quality significantly. What's more, there's way too much dialogue and the fact that exposition is not used to describe what is going on also makes it a pain to read.
If your character is tired, then describe how he is tired, not say "*in a tired voice*" and be done with it, that's just lazy and unprofessional.
There's also no indication of who is speaking most of the time so you're left wondering who is talking and the lack of exposition also makes the characters look boring. I'm here to read a story, not to uncover the mysteries of what you're writing. If I have to spend extra effort to understand what you're writing, then I might as well not read it.
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The plot looks good too, and characters looks exciting too, keep writing , author
especially the meeting between the mc and tbe demon.
the author has a good writing style, the story is interesting, the mc is likable so yeah , read it
If your character is tired, then describe how he is tired, not say "*in a tired voice*" and be done with it, that's just lazy and unprofessional.
There's also no indication of who is speaking most of the time so you're left wondering who is talking and the lack of exposition also makes the characters look boring. I'm here to read a story, not to uncover the mysteries of what you're writing. If I have to spend extra effort to understand what you're writing, then I might as well not read it.
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