God´s Eyes

"God's Eyes" is a captivating narrative that delves into the complexities of human connection and morality. The storytelling is profound, drawing readers into a world where surveillance meets spirituality. The protagonist's journey to uncover the truth is both thrilling and thought-provoking. Its exploration of ethics in a high-tech era keeps you on the edge, making it a compelling read that challenges societal norms. A must-read for those who crave a blend of suspense and philosophical inquiry.

"God's Eyes" is a captivating novel that invites readers to embark on an introspective journey, weaving together themes of empathy, morality, and the complexities of human nature. The story, set in a world where individuals possess the ability to see through others' eyes, challenges our preconceived notions about privacy, connection, and the meaning of existence.

Through its protagonist, the novel explores the ethical dilemmas that arise from having god-like vision, as they grapple with the weight of seeing both the best and darkest aspects of humanity. It delves into the power dynamics that such a gift can create, forcing characters to confront their own biases and the blurred lines between justice and judgment.

"God's Eyes" also serves as a poignant commentary on the human condition, reminding us that true understanding often lies not just in observing but in empathizing and finding common ground. The novel encourages readers to reflect on the importance of empathy, the need for privacy, and the consequences of living in a society where everyone's thoughts and actions are transparent.

Ultimately, the novel leaves readers pondering the question: if we could truly see inside each other's hearts, would it bring us closer together or push us further apart? "God's Eyes" is a thought-provoking read that stimulates discussions about the intricacies of human relationships and the complexities of the human spirit.

This book has a  very unusual storyline, and definitely will catch your attention. It is a very "out of this world"  type of story. I find it very interesting and catchy as a reader. I also loved how the author was descriptive at some points throughout the novel, especially where you needed the information. I can't wait to read more when I have free time, and leave another review after I finished the book completely. Hands down to the author for creating such an amazing and captivating storyline.


I do want to add I am the user from the forum known as the BellsandlexShow!!!

The story at the beginning is very good but over time it gets lost and becomes monotonous and boring, the protagonist loses all his personality, after he separates from Greeg's family, he becomes a robot, he just does everything perfectly, he studies, cultivates, trains, sleeps, eats, etc., in a perfect way.  And all the "problems" and "difficulties" he might face will be solved by his heavenly power.  He just has eyes that can see everything, he has the best and fastest cultivation, he thinks faster, he learns faster to the point where everything his hundreds of years old masters can teach is learned in 3 years. he does all the other stuff.  Basically the development in the novel is not automatic.  And although the author tries to sell the protagonist as a VERY SMART guy, he can be pretty dumb, like when he didn't go to his father to train with him and save humanity after 1 year of training.

This is my second review and I´ve currently released about 100 chapters before I even realized it.

Time passed so fast, I want to clarify a few things that might have annoyed some readers or caused them to cringe :3

The following list might also help new readers to decide whether to read the story or not.

1. My native language is not English and unfortunately, my grammar and vocabulary are not perfect [Sorry for that]

It might happen that the chapters from 1-60~ have some minor plot-holes/slightly weird character development and the reason for this is quite simple.

I started to write this novel without any prior writing experience and in a foreign language at that.
If you can´t bear to read a few grammar mistakes and minor overall mistakes it will be quite difficult for you to binge read or follow me on my journey.

2. There were some readers that couldn´t help but lament about the MC´s cringe-worthy behavior because he is emotional…
Jason is a youth, barely 14 years old, and had to endure a tuff past… character development shouldn´t be over in a single chapter, right?

Furthermore, due to his young age, he might act childish sometimes, even though he is used to behave like he already matured.

3. I’m sure that the MC will not have a Harem, but most likely a future romance sub-plot.

4. My Novel´s name is [God´s Eyes] but in the end, there are also other aspects, helping him to grow stronger.

5. The world our MC lives in is labeled “High-Fantasy” for a reason, please don’t try to use normal physical laws, even though I´m trying to make it a little bit realistic.

6. The story is unique, yet slow-paced and I did my best to improve my writing quality/style and every critique previously stated, but in the end, I´m just doing it as a hobby, because it´s exciting and interesting.

I gave myself 4 stars because I see that I can improve myself further and I hope everyone will give it a try :3

Thanks for reading the review <3

This is less of a review, more of a first impression as I have read 20+ chapters while writing it. So my opinion might be incomplete. I apologize if something like that happens and would like others to correct me.

I would like to start by thanking the author for his hard work and for such an amazing story. It has been quite a long time since I have read a web/light novel with a grounded and realistic MC as well as a well-built world setting.

The story started with brief background information on how it all started and necessary information about different levels. It was a nice touch and magnificently done. I liked the temperament of MC. He is intelligent yet has the thought process of 13 years old. He is responsible but doesn't give the feeling of an old man in a young boy's body. His reaction to gaining his sight back, his way to deal with money, or his reaction to his current situation is all realistic, at least as realistic as it can be in a fantasy world. He is not like a typical LN/WN MC who thinks "I am gonna murder this guy's three-generation because he disrespected me by making fun of me" not is he a pushover. He handled his situation like a mature person with a hint of teenage flair (talking about that Middle-finger scene). Overall he is a pretty likable character.

The magic system seems pretty simple and easy to follow. I don't have to check again and again which level is after what. The world setting is good so far, not too confusing. The pacing of the story is good so far. It is not going too slow or too fast. But I think there is some space to improve regarding these topics.

So far I have talked about the good things of the story. Now let's talk about the things that can be improved.

First thing, Proofreading. The story is mostly well written. But there are quite a few mistakes in grammar and sentence making that could have been avoided with a more round of checking. The number and frequency are not that high but still, it hinders the immersion.

Next, supporting character development. If first 22 chapter is any indication, I think the author should spend a bit more time developing supporting/minor characters. We have only 1 noticeable supporting character till chapter 23 and it's Greg. He is hinted to be a main supporting cast and good friend of MC. But do we know anything about him other than he is rich and talented? We don't know anything about Greg as a person or feel connected to him. If it is solved in the latter part of the story then it's ok. However, I think it should have been much sooner.

The world-building and background description are also much to be desired. For example, it helps the readers to visualize if you give a brief description of the Room MC is living in or the market and its shops when he went out shopping. Maybe a bit more description about people and environment when he went out for the first time after his sight was back. this would have helped us feel connected to the MC more.

This part is some selfish request as a reader.

Please keep the MC realistic and relatable like this. Don't make him like a thousand other MC whose improvement doesn't follow any logic or common sense. I am still miffed about that 120 points in the practical exam. MC has been blind and malnourished throughout his all life. Moreover, He doesn't exercise or haven't practiced the practical part at all. Suddenly 5 days after getting his sight back, He is using martial arts routine accurately and smoothly. And in these 5 days, he had to gather mana for the exam, learn how to read and write, prepare for the theoretical part of the exam and go out sightseeing. It is almost physically impossible for him to do this properly, no matter how easy the routine was. The craziest part is he got more points than Greg who is practicing longer than MC, has better development, and seems like a genius in martial arts. Please don't do things like this. Don't throw logic out of the window to bring sudden growth to MC or sudden character development. Please introduce a romantic interest but not a harem please. we have more than enough harem plot on this site. what we are lacking is a meaningful, non-harem romance. Please fill that void.

Story is well written with few fillers, but its weakness is MC who is hypocrite , guillable , patsy and tbh dumb. He saves random youths even without knowing if he would be able to kill those beasts( he has been mistreated his whole life and bullied so his feelings in a dog eat dog world make no sense), ends up trusting a family enough to show his eyes , even after being warned by someone few minutes ago , which he known for no more than for few minutes . He knows he is an extra but still thinks them of as family, naively tells his discovery to his teacher which he should not and tries some experiment on his second soul bond while he could have waited to find one with better potential.... Taking undue risk.

At the end , someone like him wouldn't survive in real world, and his actions scream plot armour

Author says it again and again that he is mature but in reality he is emotional mess without much rationality to back his actions. Read but don't waste your spirit stones or pass on it as his character growth stops at chapter 10.

Simple is better! Do not use big words and verbs in tenses that don't make sense! Even a comma can stop the flow of the story, and here it does. Please stop using big words just to show your vocabulary! It makes the story so hard to read. Cut the words that are put there to fill the page. It is a wonderful story with amazing potential but the writer has to realize that a phrase has rhythm. You block that rhythm with complicated words, commas that are missplaced or verbs in tenses that make no sense. A story is like a river. It has parts where it rages - that is where the reader gets to read faster, action is at the peak and you just want to know more! At the same time the river has parts where it is calm. Here the reader feels like wrapped in a cocoon of fluffy words. The immersion in the story happens here because this leads to the action! so please try harder.