I like the way you write since its a first point of view, makes me feel like Chloe. I'm like Chloe, confused at the beginning chapter. Like how did i ended up here?? Fantasy is a hard genre but you as a writer, i can say woaaaa on how you manage to write this story out. keep writing :))))
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
After reading the first chapter , I liked the flow in your story. The plot is also interesting and the characters development is also good. keep up your good work and I hope you will get a contract soon. Definitely recommend your story.
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