I just feel like there is no realism to the story in-terms of the man character and the worldHe just accepts that on dead he is transported, resurrected/given a new body and a system with no questions, surprise, etc.He first becomes aware in this new world in front of a dragon like giant lizard but then the lizards exist is completely ignored There just seems to be not detail or realism in the story at all.. I known it fantasy + system and all but collecting a 120 body strengthening fruits in a few hours and easily becoming level 20 with plenty to spare but a local harvester/collector is only level 2, why??I'm not saying I can do any better or trying to dishearten the author I just think there is so much in this story where you just think how did 5 paragraphs of necessary story telling get reduced to 2 sentences.This is the fist time I have written a negative review but it just seems like the author has a good idea but they really need to go back and re-write the story from the start and add in more details about the world and about the MC's thought processi.e why would in think he is safe after reaching level 21 given that he did it in a few hours of arriving by simply eating a few fuits. I mean has he used his appraisal like skill on some of the animals, is he just stupid and natural arrogant/delusional. I mean its the same as a normal guy going to 1 karate lesson and leaving he is now a master fighter.well if you have read to hear in my rant good on youP.S. if you are the author and you actually bother to read this I hope you take this as the constructive criticism I tried to make it.
It's not often that I get to read something like this. Being honest, I haven't read a single one so far (on webnovel), so you could say this is my first! I really liked how the story started, and as it went forward I was completely hooked. The basic storyline of the novel is already pretty intriguing. I appreciate the attention author has given to vocabulary and use of humor. I still haven't finished this yet, but so far I am impressed!! And would also like to recommend it to anyone who is thinking of reading it!
Big example of power going straight to ones head (Ego). The main lead quickly develops into a ego maniac and of course that come from being op not even 5 chapters in.
Greating writing quality, chracters inportant In the story have good background witch explains In waYs easy to undertand author has steady updates I just feel like for the main chracter Nero he is so op but he doesnt act like hE has any power like when in the begining he can sense stuff far away but later he cant and like he couldve say someone and it was a little annoying
"Pick your weapon," said Morte, kicking a box over to Rei. "How'd you get so many..." said Rei, looking at the mountain of iron in front of him. "It's from exterminations and...dead squad members....now hurry up and pick!" exclaimed Morte.
"Little miss, I am the head of all servants, you can call me grandma 'Su'. Our lord is not here now. But he will return in four days. You don't have to wait for him tonight. You are living in one of the room in the main building.Your maid can stay with you. "
And then, suddenly the supreme one appeared before them. Seeing her, all the villagers bowed down. Doko, Lily and Shito as well. Seeing them, Sasha did so, too. She guessed that they were all bowing because she had different kind of respect before the people here.
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