currently chapter 55. I think it's still worth trying............................................................................................................................................
I've read all the chapters and the story is good. It's obvious the author puts in a lot of work and has everything planned out and written in detail.Its a typical isekai story but it's better than most in terms of plot and characters.I really like the protagonist and the other characters as they add more to the great world building.The story has a lot of potential, however unfortunately it was sometimes hard to read as the writing quality wasn't the best. There are various grammar mistakes and the descriptions of things and characters made it hard to understand.Sometimes the diaologue was too long and felt heavily expositional. I guess English isnt the author first language which is fine. I think the story would benefit from a proper and thorough edit, in terms of grammar and plot, because this is a unpolished gem!I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep up the work!
I've never read anything like this before. it got me thinking. This is fun to read, very unique. Amazing world background development, amazing update stability amazing characteristic design, writing quality and story development.😫 I really like it. 100% recommend. 🥰Please continue updating. 😊
My god, I don’t understand why this story is so highly rated. Sure, it’s got a decent plot but... it reads like it’s been Machine Translated. The first paragraph of chapter 1 alone is enough to show this, as the entire paragraph is a singular sentence. There’s little to no usage of periods, commas are everywhere, and much of the word choice makes no sense. It may seem highly negative of me to say this, but personally I don’t believe that a story with so little effort put into wording deserves any sort of positive response from us. If the author wants to elevate the story higher, they need to go back and fix the writing.
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