Ichigo eyed the Arrancar nearby, but despite their unwillingness over the present matter, none made a move against Karin whose mouth was slowly curving downward. Something didn't feel quite right, yet Karin understood that it wasn't the time to voice her doubts.
"Live from city in Asia , Reporting here is that the breaking news was turned all over the world here - Due to death of Our Superhero The Survivor Gladius is now defeated by unknowns, what about the world is now due to not in the hands of a good human now.The scene is cleared that we are in trouble due to the death of our superhero.
The world was now ending. The so-called safe heaven of humans, where they could live in some harmony and peace, were being obliterated by disasters and supernatural causes. A part of it was their fault, such as climate change, and they had lived a life of ignorance. They knew it coming, but they couldn't just take matters into their own hands; they were selfish and greedy. The rich blinded themselves with material riches while the poor struggled with their necessities. This wasn't a single person's fault, it was everyone's.
I think hobi sensed the "greetings" and interaction between Yoongi and me as he asked "Do you guys know each other?" unleashing his curiosity out for us to fullfill the unknown facts.
You've something going here to be honest. Just a little feedback on your writing style, call me old school, but try to avoid writing in short forms and numbers. Spell out your words and numbers like, instead of 'U', write 'you'. Instead of 15, spell it out fifteen. Otherwise, it's a good start. Will read more.
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