a lot of you are like wtf is going on here so you know that episode where they had sex right xavion was drunk so he shatered a glass and fell on it and that is his back was injured and when he was little he was abused in one of my future chapters I will tell you guys about his past. I don't have so much time so I don't put punctuation right ok.
After I was done it was time for lunch. made some quick lunch that didn't have a lot of time to make and scrolled a little on my phone. Saw some news about Stray Kids and found some new photo's about Bang Chan, also that they were almost heading for the MAMA awards. I'm so happy they can join the Awards and I really hope they will win!!! Voted for them every day.
**Review up to chapter 290**Is the novel worth it? It definitely is, it has high quality ‘Plot’ combined with many interesting characters that tickle all the kinks… The power system is quite fun and I like how it somehow blends perfectly into a modern fantasy world without breaking the feel of it(‘ A dude that’s committed to building his harem by just cruising thru life’). You won’t get bored reading and another huge plus for me is that it looks we are in for the long run.**SPOILER, maybe?**I do have some advice to elevate the novel before it goes to the point of no return… I feel that with the last ~70 chapters the novel derailed a bit from the actual plot compared to the beginning. It’s sort of heading into short ‘stories’ around 1 heroine at a time instead of that seamless flow of events that it had, not like it’s a bad thing since there are many heroines to address(rather I liked it very much… cough) but to keep things fresh and entertaining a proper timeline of events is better. It would make the novel move at a slower pace but I think it’s necessary so that some heroines won’t be left out. Ultimately my advice is to pace the plot better and not rush things too much, I’m not talking about the events around the heroines but more like the events in between.***Anyways, good job Author! I’m excited for what’s to comeThe novel is definitely a hidden gem ✅ 9/10
Maybe i am bad at english or something else, i am having very hard time understanding what is happening with cards and power. Its seems complicated too me and very poorly actualised. I think author could not put it into simple words which was on his mind.
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