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it's as if a ten year old child wrote this. there are a few things wrong with it but what really makes it unreadable to me is how delusional the author is. its unrealistic that a government would name a group of people with supernatural powers the "superhero association" or what ever it's called. I actually wasted some time reading it hoping it would get better but it didn't. I also assume that the balance of power is highly unbalanced considering only one percent don't have powers but the police can't take care of one criminal. who's only motive I know for causing chaos is because he is perhaps bored? cause he thinks that even though he isn't a world class power that he can seriously get away with it? that's simply unreasonable and unrealistic. this whole novel is probably trash if the rest is anything like the first few chapters.
I want this person to keep going with this, there is definitely an audience for it. Nothing more, just encouragement. Thank you for sharing your art with us.
I haven't really read much of the story but the rate at which it's growing would any newbie author's eye, just like it did with me. However may I ask why the author hasn't been uploading?
Hello, this is the author of Spirit Serpent Art: The Journey To Divinity. I hope you will support my novel in WSA 2025 by voting power stones and leaving reviews. Thank you!
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