Has potential but the grammar is so disturbingExample: Zhang Yihan sat up, and turned on the lamp and took a look. There was nothing special on the desk except for the stone he picked upThe stone was walking on his way home after school at night and suddenly hit him from the skyChapter 2-----_- the stone was walking (the hell?)Would have beet better if this was TLed properly..This would easily break through 5m views here.Was this MTLed? I never read MTLed novels before but I think this is it.I thought people were joking when they said MTLed novels can make you suffer when reading but they were right.
highly highly recommended novel from the chapters i have read so far, a must read novel!ps, author you should increase the relase dates of the chapters really addictive novel so far!
After a while walking at a quiet pace, the young man noticed for a moment a little energy, which came from under the ground. It was a very strange energy. Very different from the energy that people have.
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