Free: Otherworldly Adventure

Oh woah! First of all, this novel deserves 5 star.  I know that english is not the author's first language, but you can already see the idea of the story forward. I like how it's written. Very nice pace! A masterpiece!

So far, when I read until chapter 7, the story flows naturally, neither too slow nor too fast, so I immensely enjoyed it.

There are still some grammatical errors, but they're not too distracting, so I can still leave them alone.

I don't know how the main character will develop. Still, after seeing his new life in that fantasy world, for some reason, I feel a terrible feeling that he will start an adventure with a kind and clean heart, of course maybe the author sometimes dirtied it a little with dust, but I'm sure the base is still white, so I think a story with the main character like that is not my taste, of course, this is all just my assumption after reading up to 7 chapters.

i haven't even read it yet but I'm going to read all 100 of these chapters just for you. I'm currently in the process of trying to make my own novel for WN and I would atleast like someone to do this much for me. sorry it didn't go well but I'm sure regardless of the preferences of WN users this novel is great

After reading a few chapters of the book, I decided to put the book down. My main criticism is that the writing style feels slightly elementary. There are times when the past and present tenses are used right after each other in the same paragraph which takes away from the story’s emersion.

Also, I personally didnt like how the main character seems slightly one dimensional. I havent read far, but the character doesn’t seem to have any substance. However, I would still give the story a chance, because you may like it.

Enjoy reading it ^^

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This is an emotional book. I've never felt so humbled, reading this beautifully written book. The way the author captured the pains and suffering of the ML is spectacular. I hope things turn around for Leon for the better. Marvelous job author.

I give a perfect score to writing quality and as for stability of updates, I'll give it a four. Story development is going well so far, the world background was written well while the MC is interesting and well written. Life-like, I must say. As for other characters, I can't judge them that well yet. Overall, this is a good read.

The author is able to set up the world quickly alongside with establishing who is the MC and what they are like. I personally couldn't any grammar mistake so there isn't choppy sentences or any frustration when reading.