Free: Otherworldly Adventure

I have come to a decision that I will drop this novel,
Cuz I do not see anyone actually reading it and The current situation in my life not going well.
I don't know if anyone will read this but if anyone does someday, I have one thing to say.
Thank you for at least checking my trashy novel. I am gonna write a new one, that can quench the thirst of WN general audiences.
I will drop 8 more chapters for 4 days. After that Bye.
And Thank you to the ones who actually stick with me(If I had one).
BYE

I guess I have finally dropped this. Thanks for sticking with me.

But.
If you want to see this story continued you know what needs to happen and I know that won't happen as the WN general audience's taste is... what can I say more refined..huh.
Thank you one last time.

hey man I have read such a good story in a very long time






I hope you can publish more of it. And never stop.






It has such a great potential

This is very nice, everything is written nicely and fleshed out well.                                      Cant wait to see more of it and definitely adding it to my library

The strengths:
It has good plotting that was carefully made and its pacing is fine too. It has good interactions and also dialogues. Writing quality is also there and has lots of potential.
Weakness:
Some paragraphs needed some trimming as they were too long. The author also needs to improve the vocabulary or choice of words. Flow also sometimes stuttery.
Well best of luck! And happy writing! The best is yet to come and the author has a lot more to offer! [img=recommend]

The story was quite good I like how he picked up his life...there is so much to learn in this story. it's a must-read.

l like the Leon character a lot.

keep it up, dear.....

Wow. It is such a nice story. Every character has their own personality.


They don't feel forced. Didn't have a lot of fights but I can see every fight may be meaningful in the future.

I need more chapters.

hello just me shifter here giving this novel a 10/10 AS I ALWAYS DO I THE ARCHITECT SHALL JUDGE THIS NOVEL WHEN I READ IT BE.AFRAID.OF.ME