Fragments of Dawn

AWARENESS!!I don’t know why people are into these types of “fantasies”. Fantasies lead to desire which could lead to action.This novel basically revolves around the idea of rape. Doing it without their consent is rape. Doing it when they are under influence is rape. And drugging them or consciously acting upon the decision to make someone do what you will by force or underhanded tactics is rape.Even when people say “yes” when they are drunk, they don’t have the capability to think properly at that moment and is not an actual consent. It’s still considered rape.You all probably thought of women when I was talking about rape in the previous comments, but know that men do get raped too. You read the previous comments and immediately thought, “gay”. You’re wrong, it is not only the men who do the raping, but also women. Men could also be the victim of rape especially when they are under influence, and it is done almost always by women. And they might not even know it because they wouldn’t even be able to feel the sensation from their peenis in the morning. They’ll just find out that some girl is pregnant with their child. They could even be blackmailed into being the father of their “family” by saying that he would be sued for rape if he doesn’t accept.It’s different for the women victims as people would even look down upon them and call them derogatory terms. They would even be hated because they want to or got an abortion of the rapist’s invasive gene cell. They are hated and pressured into becoming the “mother” of their rapist because it’s their blood child. If you don’t see nothing wrong with that, why don’t you eat with the knife that stabbed you in the eye? It’s okay, it’s your blood anyways(Also prove me wrong but a lump of cells isn’t a child. It’s like comparing a newly laid egg to a chick. I understand that chicks may be brought forth from it as time passes, but that is no chick when it is just a yolk. If you still try to save those lump of cells, you might as well try to save the semens that couldn’t reach the eggs)Anyways, rape is something that people should stay away from doing as it is one of the most inhumane thing that could happen to a person which I personally consider as even worse than death because they would have to live through it.

more chapters please.....more chapters please.....more chapters please.....more chapters please.....more chapters please.....more chapters please.....

I think everything is a bit fast and I love grammar so you understand next problem.The character explanation was fine but I like a little more details.

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Mr Valmon Dain as a scientist, invented a machine which will be able to track voices communication over phones and using the means to report criminal act to the police but now he was In situation whereby the latest intimation no 34 he reported, the leader of the silver Arrow group happens to be her girlfriend's dad.  Now watch out for what is going to happen next.

You know how he is. You did a really good job on this.

Agility- 700

Two years ago, Azure Zephyrine saved me from dying by falling off a cliff. She was known well in Camp Half-Blood as a shapeshifter, her appearance never once remaining the same.