Fragile in His Arms

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I'm only at chapter 11. Overall it's been alright so far. Don't be tricked by its rating, those are from the bots. It's not bad but not good. I'd give it a 3.5/5. The problem I have with the novel is that it's very vague. There is almost no description of the settings at all. We have no clue what the city looks like or what the mc's workplace looks like. When the mc enter a town, there was no description of what it looked like at all. There is also no backstory of the mc at all. We only know that he came from the earth. Side characters are also very bland. We don't get many interactions between the mc and the side characters. There's also a lot of show, don't tell. An example from the novel is when the mc asked Gu Bo how to tell the difference between beast wounds and corpse puppet wounds, "Starting from a corpse on the far end, Gu Bo pointed at its wound and explained the nuances in a low voice. These were useful and practical knowledge, so Su Jingxing listened closely and memorized everything. When Gu Bo was done explaining, the investigation was still underway". Very lazy writing from the author. Overall, if you're looking to waste your time then this novel's up for that. If you're looking for a quality novel to read then skip this novel. Don't listen to those vague reviewers who give out 4 or 5 stars like it's gold. Unless you're a kid then you probably have no idea how mediocre this novel is.

Honestly this novel is just trash. It is flawed to the bone and full of plot holes. And what made it worst is that the translators westernized  the story tooI don't recommend reading this.

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Very nice story, I loved your plot and how you define your characters and your concept of astral realm, I really am looking forward to the progress of this story and keep on the good work.

Author here, finally decided to start and try making a novel and see how that goesThis is my first "book

Amazing... the writing is smooth!! how the author Discription is well written and easy to understand. I was hook at the first chapter. The is pacing is good. I could feel Marco pain.

I stood abrutedly close to the head boy watching him munch on a chicken lap with hunger ravaging my Stomach staring at the second chicken lap in a plate on the table.