Fractured Eternity

The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.

I have been putting off writing a review for this novel because I was hoping it would get better....Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐⭐Story Development⭐Character Design⭐⭐World Background ⭐⭐ '(this is 2.6 ⭐so i tried to get it up to 3⭐ but i could not do it)' (sorry author but i tried)First of all the biggest problem in this novel is the MC. He is so so so so so frustrating to read about.He should be a proud royal dragon right? WRONG!What we get is and MC who keeps on hiding his power.(Ruler in the shadows my ass he doesn't even kill someone for 100+ chapters)So if you are her for a fun fantasy trip (turn around).MC is also super slow in cultivation like for real he is still at the first layer of the first cultivation realm! 100 chapters and he is at layer 1.I'm not kidding it takes him 100 chapters to start cultivation. He fights a few mortals that's about it...Also everyone and there nan is trying to kill MC. Yet all he does is hide and hide and hide and die (that's right he fakes his own dead to hide from mortals even tho he is a cultivator)A cultivator who can't kill a single mortal and keeps hiding from them.IT TAKES HIM 100 CHAPTERS TO TAKE CARE OF A MORTAL WHORE!!!! ^ that's right you did not read this wrong. IT takes MC 100+ chapters to take care of a random WHORE!A MORTAL WHORE WITH NO BACKING/ NOT FROM A BIG CLAN/ NOT SMART/SHE HAS NOTING SPECIAL ABOUT HER/ A NORMAL FUCKING SKANKAnd it takes MC 100+ chapters to do noting that's right he is still hiding form her.This is also a first for me in all the novels I have read I have never seen a CULTIVATOR that's hiding from a everyday MORTAL. In the last couple of chapters it seems like author is trying to turn MC around but I would not get my hopes up.The whore was alone no1 around, no protection, no reason to not kill her. And MC left.....She also Killed his dad,Tried poisoning him,Drugged his lovers,Tried selling his MAIN WIFE to a PERV,Tried selling his second wife to a perv,Tried selling his third wife to a perv, Tried selling his slave to a perv,Tried sending/drugging his MAIN WIFE to a PERV,Tried sending/drugging his second wife to a perv,Tried killing him on more the one occasion,Tried selling his lovers to another guy, Tried ....And MC lets this random WHORE run around for 100 of chapters......When all it would have taken was to just kill her and be over with it.This novel is so frustrating i don't even know if i can recommend it to anyone who is looking for a fun novel to read.I'm also not sure I will continue reading this when I'll need to pay but ill probably keep reading it but think long and hard b4 you guys start reading this FRUSTRATING NOVEL!Ooo yea i almost forgot MC is also and emotional wreck for the first 90+ chapters.So all in all its meh.

When the summary somehow says everything a nothing at the same time. It's really a wonder if the chinese authors use up all their imagination on the summary before getting to the actual story.

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Time to write what you think guys, review it and tell me your preferences...Though I really hope it will be 5 stars, I wouldn't shy away from the truth. It's a promise.Arigato!!!

disclaimer- this is not a review. This is just to help out the author.In the synopsis the last line states "treats" where I assume threats is meant to be.I am not nitpicking just pointing it out to see how many people noticed it without glossing over it accidentally.:)

Wow thanks dear author for the updates and thanks for the warm message, hope to get more updates, kisses dear

"What? Where is she?" Lee Minho turned his head towards the other man.