Fourth Sky: Puppeteer

this actually has a good idea, but there are still some shortcomings that need to be improved such as the storyline and the depiction of the world's background in this novel.

The novel concept seem solid so far and I hope the author continues to develop the story. I've always been a fan of big world and world building, so I wish the author the best of luck!

The plot is astonishing, and the characters and the situations have been written very well, This book is full of surprises! Good work author! Best of luck

A pretty interesting read overall, the writing is quite awesome though everyone has space to improve. The plot and storyline is amazing to be honest so great job Author ^.^!
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I love the storyline of this novel and how you to describe the world is quite good for me, but you must improve your writing technique and grammar
overall, i like it!

Uww never read this kind of story before... Its kinda new to me and that's why l enjoyed reading it... Also l found the world background really cool...
Author has really worked hard to build such a nice and unique story...All the best and keep writting...

interesting characters and world background and good plot

A beautiful first attempt. Good work author. There’s so much to look forward to here. Interesting plot and interesting characters to read about. A fantasy world to keep up with.












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