The writing is nice, although there is room for development, such as with certain repeated words that could be replaced with alternatives, etc. Overall, though, I enjoyed reading it, and I would especially recommend this to readers who prefer this kind of novel.
The story has great potential, and I feel the author's hard work in writing this novel, the writing is fine, sure there's space for improvement like certain repeated words, you may use synonyms for that so on and so forth, overall I enjoyed reading I recommended this mostly to those who enjoy creatures thriller type of novel.
Hey! This is my first novel.
Because English is not my native language, I am aware that I still have many shortcomings in grammar, writing techniques, and other areas.
I hope you guys still able to enjoy it!
Give me your feedback and comment on the shortcomings of my novel.
Thank you so much!
A promising plot and development. I'd say the few things are info overload. Sometimes I find my self getting a little lost with the descriptions of things because there's just so much technical information all at once. Grammar could be improved but I think the flow would be better as well once the info overload is sorted. Very promising, keep improving [img=recommend]
This is the first novel of this genre that I have ever read, and this actually made me interested in the storyline of this novel. Overall, I think this novel is good, but your writing technique should be improved. Keep it up! Good Luck![img=recommend]
Hello, first thing first, I was overwhelmed by how you tried to describe the world and it's system. I was confused and had to try to read it again. There aren't many grammatical errors but try not using repeated words. You have a great plot, but your world background and character design needs improvement.
at the beginning of the first 20 chapters the story was a bit boring, the story started to get interesting at the 30th chapter, I think this novel has a good future.
Your story holds potential. I can see that you have a very clear image in your head of how your story looks and plays out, but due to a lack of rhythm in your writing, a protagonist that could be better developed, and repeated grammar and sentence structure mistakes, it fails to come across.
Overall, I believe you can get there. You just have to keep practicing. You might want to consider hiring an editor, a least until your English improves.
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Because English is not my native language, I am aware that I still have many shortcomings in grammar, writing techniques, and other areas.
I hope you guys still able to enjoy it!
Give me your feedback and comment on the shortcomings of my novel.
Thank you so much!
Overall, I believe you can get there. You just have to keep practicing. You might want to consider hiring an editor, a least until your English improves.
I wish you the best of luck!