"W-W-WHAT" I screeched" "but thats impossible those don't ex- never mind your here and Im here as well after death so that can be considered fiction as well right?"
Hi, humble author here. I’ve given myself a 4-star rating because, as an author, there’s always room for growth. And I'm working on this story with all dedication. I’m proud of the journey and grateful for everyone who’s joined me, but I know there’s more to explore and refine. Thank you all for your feedback and support—it truly helps me improve with every chapter." I hope ya'll stay till the end and suggest and support me throughout this journey. Thanks for reading my book.
The narration of this pure gold. Literally. The system status is new and not a bore to read(like some other ones.) Very curious on why what happened to Mc. Will keeping do find out
Dean. Just Dean. Oh. My. God. The way he was introduced in this chapter 4 was pure perfection. From the moment he casually helped Ada enter the club to his quiet, observant nature, I knew he was going to be a force to be reckoned with. His perspective added a whole new level of intrigue—seeing Ada through his eyes, feeling his controlled yet simmering rage, and realizing that he was more dangerous than anyone else in that club. The moment he saw Ada being attacked, I literally cheered when he stood up and stormed out of his private booth. This chapter was thrilling, and I am OBSESSED with Dean already.
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