Well I stopped at chapter 7 the rooftop. I just could not get into the MC wishy washiness. I guess we have the Mona girl with the katana coincidentally ( I read from one of the author's comment that there is a reason). But honestly if I know the end of the world is coming today I am not sending my kid to work. So I have no idea what that reason may be.But overall I don't know why I just can't get into the story. Maybe it is the excessive description of each actions or the physically perfect MC with some forced mental health issues but the novel isn't really for me.But good luck author anyway.
I’m not sure I’m being generous with the ratings but based on what I’ve read it’s a well deserved one.While the concept of the story itself is not unique but the execution itself is noteworthy. Unlike most story of this genre where the MC got reincarnated back to the beginning of the game with their in game knowledge to exploit, the Mc here actually have to take a setback by having to start over albeit with a sassy and op system and a new hidden class.While a lot of readers might be put off by the mc’s lack of op-ness I can totally feel the potential in his development in the future.The world building is decent but it definitely needs a hit more lore to spice it up since at the moment the npc seems to be more of a backdrop rather than crucial figures in the game.
Quite a good system story. Does what a system story should in showing clear progression, clear rules for progression, and of course most importantly, a satisfying payoff for getting that progression. Looking forward to how this develops later.
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good early chaps thru char building et world building but as you keep on reading there will be to many back stories and side stories etc. you'll easily get bored and confused. just skim reading and jumping chaps. there's no kingdom building at all! read till chap 77. boriing
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