The officer then told him, "Well, what you did there was dangerous. Even though you know how to fight, you should let professionals do the fighting. After all, you're still a student, so you don't have the proper papers to be a hero."
But Gyanendra was unable to control the nation and government so he was forced to leave after a democratic movement in year 2006. A stable government was finally born and they made their constitution in 1-2 years and the government removed every power that the royal family possessed.
Fellow Daoist really takes his time to humanize every chapter making it feel like a proper read, much appreciated.Fellow Daoist really takes his time to humanize every chapter making it feel like a proper read, much appreciated.
There is no nice way to put this: This writer is barely literate. They have no idea how to write a complete sentence, let alone a complete thought. It was nigh impossible to understand just the first paragraph of the story. Please, people, I beg of you: You do not have to "publish" your story just because you wrote it. Learn how to write first. Keep writing and keep reading--really, I'm encouraging you to keep it up--but you can't honestly expect people to enjoy your story if you write at the level of a 3rd grader.
I really liked it. Keep going. I have never seen such action and such rich events in 7 chapters in my entire life. The first 7 chapters are always boring, but perhaps these are the best first 7 chapters on the platform. Don't despair. Keep going.
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