For me, no matter how genius a child is it wouldn't change the fact that he is still a child and that there would be times that a genius would express himself in a way a child does. However our ML doesn't, it would probably be more convincing if he was a reincarnated person than just simply a genius. Next would be the reactions of other villages/chiefs, normally they would be alarmed seeing a developing place as it may turn out to be a threat to their own territories. Also it's a bit unnerving seeing(well reading) adults not having any complaints about a 7 year old child(even if we say he is a genius) butting in / doing a deal with them.Well, I'm not all knowing or a great writer but that's just what I noticed that seems to be a bit out of place. But other than that it shows a very unique flow and not using much of the norms in such genre. And I cant really make such impression on the story so ill be taking more chapters before reviewing again.
Character development, ok. World building ok-ish. Grammar, ok. Druid class, more than ok and not the usual swordsman/mage/assassin. Mad Snail = questionable.
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"Then I will join the Survey Corps as well," Mikasa spoke up next surprising Eren but just as he was about to yell out for her foolishness Armin spoke up
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