Football : The New El fenomeno

It's a really entertaining story so far. It's like your classic VRMMORPG novel except the MC is an NPC who controls a stronghold full of bandits and slowly absorbs the other bandit strongholds around him as well as destroying starter villages. Sadly translation stops there.

Thanks for your honesty. I like your sypnosis, straightfoward and if someone doesn't like it then.. Don't read the novel!

Don't know if anyone else has said anything but that forehead is enormous lol only reason I checked out the novel. Just imagining the MC going through everything with a massive forehead it cracks me up.

Hi guys, as usual shameless author review here.I’m new as an author so mistakes are bound to happen, bur don’t worry I will definitely improve as times goes by. So critics are welcome!For the story, there will be many cursing as the mc background is a college student degenerate. If you like mc that doesn’t give af so much and sometimes sheer evil, you’re in the right place!Hope you enjoy and stick to the story. Don’t forget to put this novel into your library, drop a review, and vote power stones to help this novel in WPC #302Cheers!

This story is a gem! The characters and plot line are well rounded. I love the fl, she's so over the top in everything without batting an eyelash.

I Absolutely love it it is fantastic please please please do not drop this novel thank you                                                  

About Plotting, Emipre building , Romance, Erotica, there are better books to read than this one .I won't recommend you to read this book, that's for sure.Massive amount of info dump since the first chapter.And the writings ticked me off. (i don't know the original writing is bad or tl is bad)It first introduce a minor character in detail (or his cursing) and then jumped into introducing his superior and then the top prisoners he is going to free one by one in detail( they are sidekicks of Oscar i guess).And jumped to a conversation between Oscar and his lackey Domingo.and then they talked about some random guy who suicide for his child to be on Amnesty Order  and this Oscar dude interrogated the prison doctor like a boss. and he ate red trout  like a boss  which his maid prepared. And it became an introduction for Oscar's awesome bg family.he is nephew of emperor etcand vidvidly introduced his sister . And then Oscar remembeing his sister, he and his maid love scene.I was like wow wth. and chapter ended with warden getting trouble with Amnesty Order of Oscar. and cursing this: "O Neil! You damn fatty! Fat pig! You devilish dude. You son of a ***** that eats ****. Do you want to fill the world of the God of Light with sin? You are the most shameless, the dirtiest and the most disgusting trash I have ever seen! You... You... You…... What you really want is my life! Oh god! Do I have to turn my back on you now?"Wow I have no idea who the f is this o neil dude and chapter ended. Thank God it ended. I don't even want to know who the f o neil is after reading one chapter.I am so tired of reading this kind of writing.Now I am thinking Oscar is MC. But Synopsis clearly claimed that O neil dude who is mentioned twice in chapter one is MC. What to do?The lines are endless. Painfully endless.Reading them feel like I am at marathon.I dont even binge read, just read them leisurely but the conversion are so awkward. Info dump after info dump.I casually read other chapters and think their character development is awkward. and story development too, lol (Actually the characters have awesome backgrounds  settings, like 90& of characters.)And the author like to write conversation among people and then bam, he explain for a 2/3 of a chapter why this is happening.If I have to nitpick, chapter names are lazy (First Episode: Chapter 1 First Episode: Chapter 6 etc)May be it is just not my kind of book. May be one man's trash is another man's treasure. :)

He frowned (I mean he is always frowning, but in this case more than usual) and retrieved the battle axe from his back.