FNAF: Not What I Signed Up For..

Hey bud, I just wondered after starting the novel, it seems the writing is rather poor and indecent for such a great story. I’m quite bewildered as of now because I’m not quite sure what to do. That’s why I came here hoping to get answers that only you, who read both, can answer me. What is going with writing? And is he like edgy and stuff like I don’t know if you’ve read it but there’s something called a demons journey, it seems they’re similar? Do you happen to know something about that, and how did you like it? I mean frankly I want to know in comparison to Konoha hypocrite, how good is dream to immortality ?