Firstborn again

𝐻𝑒𝑦 𝑡ℎ𝑒𝑟𝑒~

"....Yes" I answer glaring at the jerkface.

The problem I have, is with the writing style. It is written in novel form, instead of the webnovel form. The story is interesting, I usually do not like female lead stories, but Alex is crafted well (maybe it is because we share the same name lol) anyways...The world building is slow, but understandable and merges well with the story development.I can't say must about the updating stability since, I just started reading it.Also...in another novel, please don't lock chapters to early, and the previous chapter should be suspenseful..Like my review, so that, I can get more points..

Shameless author here, giving my book a five-star rating.This is my first book, so there are going to be a lot of mistakes. I will make sure to learn from them and try to improve as the chapters continue. Btw, thanks for supporting my work, dear sect members!I really appreciate every review, collection, and comment.Zain, the MC of the story, is an apathetic character who hates himself. Not only that, but the world hates him too. Once, he always wanted to die but couldn't because he had many responsibilities. However, when he was finally free and about to die, he learned something that reignited his will to live and take revenge for everything. But this time, the world is trying to kill him.So, this is not the story of a protagonist but of a coward who just wanted to live for revenge...He is inspired by Guts and my first fiction main character, so yeah, there will be a lot of action and brutal fights.Thanks for everything, and congratulations on joining the "Fallen Sect."[ Failing Is A Blessing ]

Nice story. The characters are very dynamic and I like the author's style of writing. I'll keep following. Keep up the good work 😃