I look around and see a forest i look to see where am i and found iam in a hill and some kilometer have a City i think is the Floating City then i begun to think what should i do, i have 15 year before the plot begin i should cultivate and gain more strengh.
everything was pretty good since I love scheming protagonists, the way he built his empire was explained, the way he used his technology knowledge, and really I liked the way the author built his story but then, this Ricky guy was introduced when it's completely unnecessary, and then instead of getting rid of him, the author drags out the matter involving him, like how? the MC has AIs capable of spying,detecting, hacking anything on earth at that point, they control the satellite outside the orbit but couldn't catch the rebels, and then the story drags out again, the Ricky guy acts as if the MC is his nemesis and all while the MC doesn't even know him, I mean he appeared out of nowhere with his goal of eradicating the devil, dear respected author, do you know that we readers ( well most of us) hate it when the story keep getting dragged out unnecessarily ?like every time the MC gets an update, and goes into a coma, something happens that he'll have to resolve when he wakes up, the ai ends up being completely useless at the moment, and it has happened 2 times already.I think it's because Mr author is making more challenges for the MC or he wants to make the Ricky guy a major antagonist but he's the author so he knows his story more than me.i just wanted to point out a few things that's all. otherwise the story is pretty good and maybe I'm just impatient.and also thanks for all the hardwork mister author!
Hello, Author Navi here! Shamelessly, I’m giving my own novel a 5-star rating. I promise this isn’t just another mainstream isekai—I poured my heart into writing this. I also drew from my own life experiences to shape Takahiro Nao’s background and infused them into certain chapters. I did all of this in hopes of creating a story that truly touches the hearts of my readers.Takahiro Nao’s journey will show you the true meaning of sacrificing everything for the ones you love.Writing this novel is my dream, especially if it ever gets adapted into a comic. I would be overjoyed if that happens, but even if it doesn’t and this novel doesn’t gain much attention, that’s okay too. I just want to leave my work in this world before I’m gone.Please support me! Thank you.With love,Navirunaviii
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