"just like in canon" I can't count the number of time I read these word he don't lie when he say he's lazy Naruto is overpowered but nothing change in the story. no butterfly effect it's really the original story with a side story of Naruto getting stronger
Beast taming. Nothing the least bit interesting or unique about the setting, characters, or plot. I'm fairly certain all the high reviews are just bots, or something, because there's no way anyone could actually enjoy this.
I wanted to write a fun, cultivation world novel while using the usual cliches and tropes of the genre in my own way. This is not your typical cultivation novel, and I hope you enjoy this.This novel is based on the fun adventures of a reborn disciple from Earth and Immortal Master who lacks social skills.Planning to update 1/day. I want to write slightly long chapters and hence it's hard for multiple releases. I am thinking of breaking down long chapters to 2 for the first week.I know I am not great at writing, and I forget even the basic grammar rules. But I really want to tell stories.So if you find errors or have suggestions, please feel free to comment.This is my entry for WPC #108.I do realize the works that I am a horrible editor of my own work. So, if I end up missing anything, I will try to go back and edit those past chapters after a certain number of chapters get released.Looking forward to building this novel with you all and learning from it.Still why I give this a 5* rating? Because I am shameless and this is my own novel xd.
Just finished reading a few chapters.In terms of writing, I found it very easy to read and the flow was smooth. I didn't come across many grammatical errors which is great for a wider audience. The conversational style of storytelling was engaging and I didn't have to keep going back to understand what was happening.The plot was interesting and cleverly intertwined the protagonist's past and present life to create conflict, which gave the story great potential for development.I felt that the characters were played safe, but overall they were okay. I hope to see growth and development in them as the story progresses.The updating stability was consistent which is great for readers who want to keep up with the story.The world background was well laid out and clear, and I am excited to see how it develops as the story progresses.Overall, I enjoyed reading this and I plan on keeping it in my library.
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