A good novel,with a good progression system.Some problems would be one 1)If you were not born as a supernatural entity then it would be difficult for you to progress.2)The mc access higher levels too fast but it has it's dangers tooand there are many mysteries waiting to be un covered.
Keep the focus on Hossam’s internal and external struggles, and make sure the fantasy world feels both magical and dangerous. Balance action with character development, and ensure that Hossam’s growth as a person is just as important as the adventure itself. This combination of magic, personal growth, and discovery will make your story not just exciting, but emotionally resonant for readers.
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