I really liked this story. I'm usually not into reading horror stories but this one was really good. Great job, keep writing, and thank you for helping me as well!!
Never knew being a ghost could be so fun. There is alot of smut in this story. It takes a unique path into accomplishing all these 18+ scenes. However, this ruins the pacing of the story and has multiple chapters dedicated to a single scene. I do enjoy the new direction you taking currently that made up for the lacking plot. I only wish you'd update.
So I’m not normaly one to write reviews on novels but after some consideration this novel deservs to get the attention. Now that being said as the titel of the novel indicates the story is a bit different and I mean that in a good way, but hey you checked the novel out so it means you at least enjoy this kind of story. Now a little disclaimer, the story is a bit slow at the beginning and it might feel like not much is happening bit it picks up the pace a bit into the story so even if you feel like something is missing I would recommend at least reading the free part .Now for the more reviewing part of the review, you might disagree as I’m no proffessional. I have my own preferences and biases but I will try to be as honest as possible so keep the non constructive comments to a minimum.The writing according to me flows nicely and transitions in a nice way from scene to scene and helps imersion in the story. It’s to be grammaticaly correct most of the time since it is impossible to be completely correct without someone solely dedicated to proffreading and even then it is hard. That said it was a bit worse the first bit of the story but as the author has grown it has become really good.4/5 Since the beginning was a bit stale but the rest of the story makes up for it.The update stability is at the top on this website as the author most of the time not only keeps to his high amount of releases but when he for some reason can’t he always tell us why and makes sure we know what is happening even when it takes longer than he expected.5/5 Even though this will only be important once you caught up and are hooked like the rest of us.The story development had a slow start with not to much happening. That being said, it kicks up a gear after the beginning and starts taking you through the huge world of achievement junkie and indicates that there might be something more. Many small things that you get introduced to that seems like it not to important comes back and show its importance, demonstrating how the story direction and framework was worked out early on and gives the reader the satisfaction of connecting the dots.4/5 The beginning was a bit too slow started but still well planned out and important while the latter parts is that but also faster paced.For the caracters I can only say that this is the best novel I can recall to have so many characters that feels memorable, alive and uniqe. It’s almost a disservice to the author to try to describe them, so if you read to enjoy the characters this is the novel for you.5/5 Simply amazingThe world background is nice and and fleshed out with even kingdoms histories being described (in a nonrambling way in contrast to me XD). Descriptions of the environment is plenty enough to help keep the immersion but not so much it clogs up the story. All that aside, not only is the novel well planned out, it is hinted at much more coming. Imagine the marvel cinematic universe but novel edition. We don’t have to much information yet how exactly it will be done though so dont fix your mindset on that until then.5/5 World history is fleshed out nicely, environment decribed in a good nonannoying way and there is more coming/is planned out for the story universe.Thank you for reading my overly long review (I just wanted to be thorough).And since you were able to spend this time just to read through this long of a review, know that the story is more worth to spend the time on. At least read all the free chapters before desiding to keep reading or not.
why all the novels in the trial lead this time are "lecherous"?..............all of the novels are just like wish fulfilment stories of a Virgin grumpy loner.
Heyho 🙋🏿u200d♂️,it's me a random reader that has been reading over 169 Chapter of this gem. I can just tell you that I loved nearly every part of it! The characters are well written and unique in a type of way I won't forget them even after 40+chapters. The World in itself has a lot of lore and within it a lot of mystery around it and just like the story itself shows us everything in a detailed well written manner! [ READ IT U WONT REGRET IT ] 🤸🏿u200d♂️🕺🏿
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