Fangs of westbrook

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"She's always so Indifferent to me... Despite being married for three days, we have not once held hands? I don't even know if she's my bride or my ANCESTOR!"the first few chapter is beautifully done. i got stuck just after reading the first 10chapters,After reading 60Chapter, it contain many aspect to view it as harem but still, the female lead is against the MC flirting with another women.

Don't waste your time with this story. All the low ratings and comments are true. Wish I had read them first.The story starts with an interesting premise but by the fourth reincarnation, the author runs out of ideas and the deduction system in the title disappears. The plot is messy and details are missing. It just jumps randomly like it was written by an old chatbot. ChatGPT would have done a much better job.The first 2 reincarantions take up 48 chapters, the 3rd runs from chapter 57 to 117, but the 4th runs from 120  to 662.The 4th reincarnation forgets the MC is suppose to do things to earn points. About half way through, the author starts writing a second story with another MC that barely intersects with the main story. After that the MC gets OP and ascends to the next level at which point the author or the translator has skipped so many details the story is garbage. Towards the end, the MC throws himself into the reincarnation cycle of that world instead of returning to his own and goes off on a 5th reincarnation cycle.The 5th is a standard Wuxia trope with crippled young master dumped by finance.

Oh boy, where should I start with this.In the beginning, it was okay. Not particularly great, mind you, and it didn't really break the mold beyond its premise, but that itself was interesting enough that I was willing to give it a try.Then we get to chapter 30-31. Spoilers ahead:So, the MC and his party are being impeded by the Confucians on the island where the land he purchased is, to protest against his incoming shutdown of the brothel on it (which they're fond of). They rail against him, and the MC is apparently in a dilemma according to the current antagonist - he can't just have them killed, cause quite a few of those Confucians are ordained by the Imperial Advisor, who his father and family is subordinate to. Let's leave aside the morality of killing unarmed people who are basically just trash-talking you - that's probably a fantasy of many people on Qidian, no point in looking for support on that matter here. Here, we're presented a problem the MC should have to solve with his wits, and we've had it explained to us before about exactly why this is a problem, and how the MC will have to deal with it. So how does the MC deal with it?By ... killing them all by ordering his Grandmaster servant. Great. So all that talk earlier was complete bull****, huh? Based on how the story's going, it probably won't even matter. So the MC deals with things in the most retarded, straightforward way, gets praised for it, and we're supposed to look up to this idiot and the plot that tries to create obstacles for the MC, but goes back to sucking his dick when he says no.Too dumb for me, fam. I'm out.

Just here to review don't mind me....................................................................................... it's a good novel btw.......

Wow 🤧 the whole time I was reading this, I was literally pouting. The story is so sad and I love that it is relatable and portrays things that a person may face in their lives or things that their friends face.   I believe that whoever reads this book may find solitude and be given hope of not giving up when life is hard, but instead persevering through the trials. Great story. Really really great

Hello all, this is the author behind V.I.R.A.L. I thought this would be the easiest way to talk to you all about this book. I thank you all for taking the time to read this story, I've had this story idea for years now, and I am so looking forwards to writing it. As of this moment, my spelling nor grammar is fantastic, I have no editor, so I must edit and produce these chapters daily. Please excuse the spelling mistakes!This story sees the concept of superheroes being internet personalities like streamers and YouTubers. This story follows a group of streamers trying to make ends meet and become the number one streamer. I thought before you read this story, I would give you a heads up on what the information is like the pros and cons in my eyes.The cons to this book to some people may include-Many main characters. As of volume 1, I have six main characters. This means not everyone gets the spotlight and some might be forgotten for a while although I do try and give every character their moments to shine-Slow pace. Compared to other superhero stories, don't expect a fight scene every chapter. I can have serval chapters of just character development and day to day activities. I wanted this to be a character drive story so a lot of action can take a back seat for that.-Poor Grammer. It's something I can't hide. The earlier chapters have plenty of spelling mistakes and grammar, which I can no longer fix. The now updated ones have mitigated this, but I cannot promise any errors here and there.If you guys can get over those shortcomings, then I welcome you to V.I.R.A.L, a character-driven superhero story with hardship, friendship and betrayal as becoming a streamer isn't easy. Please give it a read for yourself and have a look.P.S I gave myself 3.8 stars as that's where I believe that is where the story is as of volume 2. I have big plans and hope to gain more fans and love. No story can ever be five stars in my eyes as there is always room for improvement!