To be honest, I didn't have the highest expectations when I was reading this. Turns out, personally I find that reading this is way more enjoyable than most post apocalyptic scenarios I've read.The MC is naturally a overpowered killing machine from the start of the story, he meets new people throughout but right now I barely see much development of the characters as we progress. The most I see is their basic backstories of why they are here or "Oh no! How will we survive? We can't let MC carry us, etc" I hope that as I get further into the story we would further expand on backgrounds of characters and their past lives.Another thing to mention is the writing quality, some sentences are badly written missing proper grammar (Barely Readable, hope you fix it or find a editor lol), with the cliche enemy rises because MC didn't finish him off and he becomes stronger trope (but at least he is strong enough to pull off situations and look bad ass,). If you can ignore these aspects of this novel and looking for a new zombie type of novel definitely try it out.
It has a very unusual story, and it is between real fiction and fantastic. And there are some gore stuff also:) Author has a very special imaginary in his/her mind. I liked it very much
Hey author-san I just wanted to tell you how great your book is and how much I enjoy it. I would have given a 5 star review but with how many chapters there is I dont think its five star status but if it keeps developing down this road I do believe it can get 5 star status. I really love the system it reminds me of “Sovereign of the karmatic system” but I ended up dropping that book because it got very repetitive towards the end I hope that this novel doesnt go down that path. Also I hope that this book isnt like Martial god asura where the mc beats someones long lost son and now the mc has to beat a whole family tree. But besides that great book 👍 I really enjoy it and I hope you keep it up.
The authors premise is solid enough. Character and plot development need work. The writing as a whole is stilted and needs polishing. The writing style seems to point to the authors lack of maturity. I'm sure he or she will be able to weave more coherent tales as they grow as an author. This is not a bad effort though and the novel as a whole is readable unlike others I have read. This author is right on the precipice of being a good writer. It won't hurt to give this story a read. Just know that it is lacking. Especially in character interactions with other characters and the way situations are fleshed out. An example is how the world reacts to the characters return from the seven year dungeon. Another is the interaction between the character and the guild his father helped found.
ok lucien is new leylin fanlier , he still pure.. but i bet in the end he will step in the darkness and become cold blooded struggling to survive and seeking powerthe story are great, the con for me is the explanation abaout spell is lacking, you know what? i enjoy his story about his carrier in music than his path on become a magus
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