Fairytales & Delusions

I cant be the only 1 that can relate to Byung. It is scary how similar we are😂🤣😎 Good novel, I personally hope it does not lose the momentum it has built.

I do not recommend this novel. The first 4 chapters he writes exam papers while every teacher gives some random immature comments, the next 15 chapters those papers circulate on the internet and everyone gives random comments again. Yes that's right, this happens for 15 chapters. This is the worst pacing i have ever seen

Love this! Easily one of the better novels on here, despite the authors peculiarities (his obsession with one liners after long pauses) they have created a really solid world and nice reading experience. Overall it’s a very fun read and I am expecting it to get even better!Although i do have some complaints but they’re more about my preferences than the authors writing quality. The only technical thing I could say about this is that the author should be careful not to subconsciously or otherwise become consumed by the Chinese fiction way of writing, fellow cultiva- Ahem, anyways, some vibes I got were very manuah-y or whatever you’d call that spice. Its not an entirely technical complaint and also more of my preference but sudden vibe changes do ruin the pace and already built atmosphere of what you’ve got!Also I’d like to see how the waifus progress! Hopefully they do get an important role after their power ups and development. I’ve seen too many stories where the girls around the mc are immortals with one in a million years bodies only for it to become completely pointless and a waste of time because the Mc has become so much more stupidly powerful than them, where their progress might as well not even matter. Although so far you have done really well with them, and because of it i am even more invested in how they’ll become later on! I hope the Mc doesn’t lose the need to depend on their capabilities because so far you’ve done really well with it. I also like you writing more about the emotional and mental aspect of things and their relationships. (But perhaps you can hold back on those paragraphs of whatever the mc tries to do to sound wise and experienced? It’s probably one of the only things I actually found a bit hard to read so far.)Ah, also I gave about three stars because although the story is a good read it has the potential to be even better! Don’t rush and trust the process, it’s usually better that way! So many authors that get told their stories are good end up rushing things to get even more praise or whatever and ruin the good they had! But also don’t waste chapters please! Well, those date chapters were really nice though 😩👍

Isn’t this pretty much a fanfic? How is it even legal to demand coins to read this story?............. ............. ............. .............

Nice story aage or bhi ese hi story dalte rahe or aage bado taki sab log ka entertainment ho sake aap ko bhagwan lambhi Umar se aap jio 101 sal taki aap ko acchi acchi gf mil sake

YURI, PLEASE YURI, come on author, there are not many novels with this category, I would not like to be given yaoi, well is your novel and we respect it but it would be something not comic, romance with a princess XD

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Waiting is also a kind of faith, the sea of love is too deep, time is too shallow, the autumn night withered in the fallen leaves soaked sky, yellow world little by little with the wind and gradually far away.