Faded Ties

bread is sweet

Not worth reading with no editor and the mc name able to change in the 20 chapters and other stuff.

raw plz?                                                                                                                                                                                      

My main problem with this novel is how the Author fills up the chapter with multiple of same system announcements instead of just putting something like x10.  They will literally repeat it 2-4 times in the chapter thus wasting my coins or passes🤬🤬🤬.Also seems to have forgotten how the MCs skill works later on.I would truly rate this a 4 star if these weren't an issue.

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I need to improve my writing and the transitioning between characters and knowing when to stop and start sentences , over all I think the plot would be good because I have a plan but I need Improve on my writing style .

I guess I have finally dropped this. Thanks for sticking with me.But.If you want to see this story continued you know what needs to happen and I know that won't happen as the WN general audience's taste is... what can I say more refined..huh. Thank you one last time.

Woowww Loving the world you have built the story already got me hooked right into... The main character was very nicely scripted, and there was a certain sense of mystery that surrounded the whole novel that I really enjoyed.  Can't really wait to read what happens next!!