I love that this story has a veteran as mc, with no cheats but his own skills. So no hidden teachers that make him even more op. What I love about this story is that the mc is in fact a teacher himself to newbies with lots of potential. This story starts withmc alone, and you will read his journy in the tenth server and back to the top, while he makes new friends and had new teammates along the way. Great story.
As a person who is knowledgeable about baseball, this story hurts my eyes a little. Even in major league the biggest tournament about baseball, 100m is hard to see. Highschool students have an average speed of 70-80miles. Pros can’t even hit 100m much of a 13 year old kid.
To Warmaisach,I've been reading this novel since it was a trial read. It has only gotten better and better. While I would love to be able to read more than two chapters a day, please don't rush the chapters. The current quality of the novel is absolutely amazing. Thank you for your awesome story and I look forward to being able to read it until it's conclusion. (Which hopefully will not happen for a long time :))
WRITING QUALITY:-A commen phenomenon with Original Authors sadly is poor writing quality, however this guy is an execption. The use of punctuation, paragraphs of reasonable length meaning not too long or short, and overall a readable flow which is what we readers expect. Why shouldnt we if were investing our time into a story? A story that will take us on a rollar coaster of emotions. 5/5STABILITY OF UPDATES:Since Ive binged this novel up to current chapter... I don;t have a full pciture to comment on. What I do appreciate though is a novel past 200 chapters still going strong. Several OAs ive been reading have fallen of the wagon out of knowhere sadly. Thankfully this guy is not one of them (fingers crossed) 5/5STORY DEVELOPMENT:The Story mentions that there current world is just small part of a ever larger universe. This is to be assumed and people at this point shouldn't be suprised. Putting that aside we have enough story to understand the situation while leaving some mystery which I feel is necessary. Also the author has put a timetable out for the MC to reach a certain cultivation level so it wont be dragged on in ths same place. Enough Urgency to move everything forward 5/5CHARACTER DESIGN:This is by far one of my favirote novels in this regard. Iv'e read enough old authors and new original authors to see well done characters.MC - Man who started off on the extreme side of benevolence only to get betrayed. So one can expect him to pendlum swing the other way, however he dosen't stay there long after his first 2 women heal some of his emotional wounds and give him some faith in humans again. With his companion Luna also forcing him to face some of his repeating traumatic patterns that do more harm then good to those around him and more importantly himself. Great stuff. 5/5Harem Members - The 1st one has been shown to have a rough history while manging to keep her optimistic view on life in contrast to the MC (I know he was dealth a worse hands, but I still think this point has merit). Her power is strong enough to stick with the MC for the long run. Good Stuff. Dont need a weak lover in the cultivation world2nd women while some may view her as too agreeable with the MC I like her overall. Growing up alone with no connection.. to finding the MC and not wanting to let go developing a possesive attitude border line Yandere.. to slowley understanding the way people interact all makes sense. Is it emotionally healthy? No, but how could it be given the world and her experiences.Others:Several potentail allies have been shown. Too early to say if they'll stick with the MC or not given the current plot. Still well thoughout charcters from the looks of it so far.WORLD BACKGROUND:This novel despite being over 250+ chapters in is still very mysterious. Multiple demensions if you zoom out to the max. While the current land mass may or may not be the only one. I wanted to give this a 4/5, however I understand its still too early to know such information so I'll give it a 5/5 in hopes clarity will happen soon. OVERALL:Worth the read. Truly. Cultviation stucture is easy to understand, charcters have depth and are develpoing. Story is progressing at a resonable pace. 5/5
Writing Quality - Translation quality noticeably worsened after ch 37 for some reason. So many commas are used in. place of periods. Terminology could also be betterStory Development - Seems standard so far. It seems to be heading into the parents are actually op with hidden background trope. Pacing is decent I guess.Character Design - MC is a logical person, treats demons realistically instead of just using the power of friendship. There's still no arrogant young master yet so that is a plus. Trash mobs are still present though.Updating Stability - We will see when and if it gets picked.World Background - Power system will probably be confusing to most. There is 3 seperate systems along with the bloodline: level, class, and grade in increasing importance and difficulty to improve. The geography and state of affairs has not been mentioned also, but it is still 60 chapters so it can be forgiven i guess.
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