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The concept is really good. The whole world is based on a non-existent Novel and thus follows the journey of the MC who has been reincarnated into one of the non-human races.
The only problem is with how this idea has been implemented. The story is written assuming you know about the world and characters thus bombarding you with lots of facts which would make sense if we had access to the source material. Overall the concept and story is quite good but poorly implemented.

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Writing quality     3.8 out of 5

The author writing quality is somewhat above average
he has not made any large mistakes just some small things here and there so its a cut above average but not top tier.

Updates  4.1 out of 5

The author has updated quite stable the reason why i put 4.1 is because its not frequent  around 3-4 chapters a week

story development 3.2 out of 5

So the story is intriguing but its quite fast pace since you will read about being in a cave to out on the fields,

Then there are several unnecessary other than the MC povs that pops up from seemingly anywhere and then pops back onto Mc witch is in a whole new scenario than when you left him in.

I wouldn't care much if it only happend 3 or 4 times but it was like 6 or 7 it quite honestly ruined the flow the story and it felt like the athour was only filling in for the word count had but aside from that if you just skip the povs and focus on the Mc the story is still great.

Character Design 3.4 out of 5

Now if i had to describe it its extremely vague we get he is somewhat evil and tyrannical but we really dont know what his motives are it feels like one of those superhero villains that has one emotion put into them and we just follow that he is somewhat like a robot except with a lot of anger there isn't any laughter or  being amused or even happiness outside of combat.

so MC is a quite interesting character except i wished he showed some other emotions on how he reacts to his subordinates or even thinks just show how he thinks about them cause the only thing explaining them is scheming or cunning war-like.

All side characters where basically based on a concept
cunning scheming war-like airhead-like reckless this could be good in some cases but when you dont show off the side characters personality
it becomes hard to connect to them.

Thought they all have somewhat off a personality but the moment you have a chance for them to express them and understand them a pov cuts it off or some text like going into the future for 30 min.

World background 4.9 out of 5

it seems like a solid world cant say much about the author seems like he has a good idea on how he wants to build the world as a whole and im okay with it.

personal opinion and overall score 3.9

Personally i quite enjoy this novels there are sometimes some gaps of logic in the novel where i have to go back and read the part again but for the most part it makes sense and i quite enjoy the novel.

It is a kingdom building, action novel that is based with the Mc as a orc
It puts the main character of this novel into another novel thought this isn't explained that well and Mc background is seemingly from a yakuza/mafia/gang background and he seemed to have had some position there but probably not the highest ranking one cause his anger and ambition seemingly comes from both arrogance and ill feelings towards his former boss.

for the most part this is a good novel except some parts it mentions things seemingly out of nowhere and there isn't much of an explanation to why he came into that sense of logic or how we/he got to know that.

The concept is good. This story could be great but it's somewhat unreadable. The author keep changing perspective that breaks the immersion. and keep using 1st person and 3rd person. Please choose one and stick with it.

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This needs an editor. The constant POV switches make it hard to follow the story. Also, the MC feels a bit fake, idk, maybe I should just give this more time.

How can so many writing mistakes be made in just one sentence... I feel like I will find out if I keep reading, which I will not. Why the hell are the random capitalizations and some sentences don't start with one? I don't care about the story quality because my attention is taken by the writing mistakes.

tbh i still havent read the story .i was just drawn by the thick thighs ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................