an average quality CN webnovel, brought down by bad quality machine translation, "translator" just pump out as many chapters as they can and didn't bother to edit, and correct any mistake. Don't bother to pay or vote for this novel just read free machine translated one.
Look, Im just gonna be honest. Even with reading the auxillary chapter and other reviewers saying that it gets better X chapters later, I cant reccomend this one. The main point of contention with this one is the Mc. Guys seems to be a normal dude who gets isekaied via bike and shoved into a otome game before being essentialy emotionally lobotomized. I understand its because of said system but my honest question was why? Yes, you explained why it happened story-wise, but why was that character shift needed? Was it really neccessary to remove the original personality so early in the story and replace it with whatever Zombie's personality is, if you can call that a complete personality? Does that add anything to the story other then frustration and removing the voice of modern history from the story? If it was Zombie with little bits of the MC poking through every now and then, that would be acceptable.As soon as MC was killed the second time, he essentially just became another,less interesting character. If you had removed the isekai elements from the story and just had him as a basic mob in the original game, there would lose essentially nothing because for a otome game setting, there are almost no Otome game elements.You coul just call it a fantasy world and nobody would notice the diffrence. If it takes 50+ chapters to get somewhat interesting or for some development to happen, and I have to pay for the later part of those chapters, then this novel is not worth it at all. Nobody wants to buy a video game that only gets good 40hrs in. If you want someone to read your book or buy your game, then that 1st impression matters the most, and this book does not make a good one.
too lazy to write a review but i like the novel so much i'm going to write one anyways. too lazy to write a review but i like the novel so much i'm going to write one anyways. too lazy to write a review but i like the novel so much i'm going to write one anyways.
Do not put any money into this. After charging for chapters the writing style changes completely. The gender pronouns are fixed, it is now a disjointed mess. Suddenly you are expected to follow a bunch of people's perspectives and the story is lost fast. After the paywall the story you paid for is gone replaced by a hot mess. If you want a fun story of a mage with his quirky maids, then do not read this.A ton of overly complicated drama happens after a girl is captured that ruins it for no reason.It had potential and I will state that if it was not rushed the way it is now. It could be good; however, they did not do that. At this point from the point the princess enters the story it needs a ton of work. If it gets the work needed it could be great.
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This has turned out surprisingly to be a quite a good book. A lot of times crafting books get a bit boring, but the author manages to keep you interested with battles, world descriptions and more . World development is fascinating and the characters around MC are interesting as well. The only wish is for the author to do more updates!🙏
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