Everything will be my way!

If theres one thing this author does right its building up a rhetoric with the characters, you actually care  and enjoy reading about all of them and their conversations with the MC.
The downside to this is the author sometimes drags on arcs or plot points for far too long, at least in most readers opinions and from my personal viewpoint.
The author seriously drags on the MCs torture/mansion for quite a few chapters, but in exchange it awards us with the feelings of actually  caring about the dynamics with Juno, Dinah, Anna, and others. For example we understand why Juno and the MC hate each other to their cores, and the narrative does a very good job reminding us, without being obnoxious.
TLDR I would say this story is very mediocre, the one redeeming feature is the character dynamics and development.
I hope Author finishes this story without a rushed ending and goes on to make an even better one.
**. this story might be harem however every girl except one (stephanie) hates the MC so I cant actually say its harem, at least not for the first 200 chapters. There is quite a few women around the MC, and they might fall in love with him later in the story and/or gradually.

dude after reading this I cannot read other novels because I want a book similar to this but I can't find any.If anyone knows of a similar novel recommend it pls
Btw author if you are reading this review for the sake of your fans pleaseeeee release more chapters every week.

I wasn't expecting anything tbh since I've read too many novels already. I won't say its completely New as I don't know every existing novel but it's a breath of fresh air to me and I would absolutelty recommend it

This is one of the better slowly developed novels out there on this platform. It’s not too fast pace as with some other novels where other MCs just go * here * and there. This book has one of the best by far character developments and gives you an insight on how really each persons relationship to the MC is. The character development is too a point where you may even feel connected and share feelings with them. Another great thing of this novel is the MC powers and strengths. By that I mean how it is slowly growing from weak to strong but not in a fashion you’d feel like it is “just another” novel, such as the MC actually experiencing failure, issues that prevent him from doing something; basically he has challenges and as a quick summary, overall this is a great novel!
Keep up the great work author! Cool perk is as of this moment, reading this novel is 100% free!

TLDR: Amazing novel with really good character development and his “OPness” isn’t instant which leads to quite an exciting read overall. Give this a try if you haven’t already!

TO not gave much away here is what to expect before reading

Starts off good and you get a scrawny kid uses mind to climb to better life as slave. Faces hardship grows and the torture gets to him turns him seeking hurt (Masochist). Foriegn forces intereferes yet he perseveres. All of a sudden things go down from their.
As the author claims he pays good deeds and bad deeds. NOT true.
At a point you take him as an Evil MC and accept his action.
Somethings I can not accept is to empower his enemy and also to give up on his friend/saviour and gets same enemy more girls by spending a lot of money.

I could accept all his evil, but this was my bottom-line. There might be some clever scheme of MC or whatever but when the person involved in this perhaps the only relatable, human person that helped the MC it is no longer something I can endure.

Good luck with your work and continue on. You are a good writer unfortunately the story is no longer for me. Do not be discouraged, this is not my niche story.



Below is a summery of why I gave up, it contains spoilers.

1 - MC starts off a slave and you wish him well
2 - MC climbs in rank - gets pushed into situation by F where everyone dies
3 - MC survives barely with the help of F's *** slave M
4 - He gets know M and kisses her, they are close now
5 - She wishes to be free - he tries and helps her
6 - He gets out of situation but does not really take revenge, In facts delays it (You can assume he is a masochist for it to understand )
7 - He later goes some where and does some stuff taking more punishment, heartache turns to a welcoming mat
8 - He had some fights looking good for him, but his plans fail because of an annoying person, but uses a mother figure to get back affection
9 - story gets good, he is not a zombie that getting spit on, but haves fun with an alter-ego
10 - M who has saved him is given to F her old owner, F who also wanted to kill him is improved with his unique gift and MC schemes against M - He gives F another beutiful girl, when things do not go his way - he is now against M to make her jelous and alone, so she can run back to her old owner.

Great story!ᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠᅠ

Too good...this book is just so good.

The world and the arcs as of ch83 are descriptive and well built. The story pacing is okay. But my main problem is that the Mc for a genius has a brain that isn't functioning most of the time. This is mostly done to hinder the  Mc development and standing and getting some suspense into the story. I have no problem with dumb Mc's, I am quite fond of Luffy(One Piece) after all, but I hate it when an author tries to sell me an idiot as a Genius. And he is seemingly only made an idiot to limit his op ability.