The world, story and characters are great and quiet original for wuxia novel. Many culture are present among African, Chinese, Japanese and westerner.But the writing is really bad. Repititions and typing errors are common among other annoying things and sometimes the writing feels of, the characters know things they shouldn't or you feel you missed something that wasn't told.Honestly, I can't recommend this novel due to the writing that gets on my never. But if you are lenient on it, it's an excellent story with good characters.
Ok this story seems quite nice. BUT it seems MUCH is lost in translation. One second this is happening and then "Bam!" the story changes. No clue how or why. I am not sure if this was the writing style of the author or if the translator just omits weird parts. So as a reader I say enjoy it but prepare to be frustrated with how the story bounces around and you as a reader have to figure out wtf is going on. I myself still have parts I am unsure what happen.
Compulsory 5 star rating for myself because I am a shameless author.This story is 99% smut and 1% nightmare fuel. There is a plot, but it is not that complicated. The MC is looking for a master. Actually, that is about it, so why like 500 chapters long? 99% smut! Just enjoy it for what it is. Don't think too much. I certainly didn't. Also. There are parody of a lot of other stuffs, mostly other people works because I am having fun. Shouldn't you be?Join the Aspectual Discord Server!
tbh I quite hate the idea of harem in an idol/showbiz genre. Let's say harem in mediveal and fantasy type novels, harem is often a great fan service. But in a modern and idol at that...I don't really like it but fair enough it's your story. Tho saying all this, I'm still gonna enjoy reading and fighting on your journey.
Just finished reading the first 20 chapters, and I gotta say, it's a mixed bag. The MC being a Special Ops soldier in a magical world is cool, but he's kinda inconsistent. Sometimes he's cautious and cold, other times he's easily swayed by strangers. The military system has potential, but it needs more explanation and detail. Also, the MC should question his surroundings more instead of just accepting things.Overall, it's not terrible, but there's room for improvement. Hoping it gets better in later chapters. Keep it up, author!
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