My story is about a VRMMORPG with some common traits, but it also has its own characteristics. Because of this, I thought it necessary to describe some of the game mechanics for the readers do not to feel lost. As a gamer myself, I always have a difficult time understanding when a game novel showed numbers that don't make sense so I may have described a little too much about its details. And for me don't bore people to death, I began revising the first few chapters, trying to increase the writing quality and work more on the characters.
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a simple mission to kill werewolf is of hundred chapters and when will he advance to rank 3 mage?? The story development is really slow,I hope you can make it fast and it's really boring reading all the nonsense like his his research on blood of werewolf, please make is short and make the MC somewhat mature cause he is already 23 yrs old
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