I will be shameful here and give my novel a 5 stars. You have read my previous novels, then you will know that I am trying to write a showbiz novel for a long time and this was the piece I ultimately wrote with my current skill. It will be a long journey and the MC will slowly reach the top. The novel would have elements from other showbiz novels like Top management and God of music but I will keep the plot as original as I can.The start of this story is actually from a novel i had read a long time ago and then, the setting would change as soon as he enters a agency.There would many new characters and some potential love interest but I will go with a Yandere for the main heroine.If you have any thoughts about this novel and how can I make it more good, do tell me in the comments and please review this novel.
The story had a cliche plot from the beginning but that's generally okay. Good plots are used over and over because people like them. My issue was terrible writing quality and an insensible amount of plot armor. There's far too little world background, and our main character seemingly caught up to people with a 2 year head start in like 4 chapters. Now he's participating in world events he shouldn't be strong enough to touch. Entire guilds. These people should vastly out level him.
I was the previous translator for this novel, and it's a great read to those of you guys who like OP mcs and the Litrpg genre in general.Translation quality:3/5. Subpar, but definitely decent. Although there are many things I disagree on such as the various character names as well as the arbitrary switch from 'free points' to 'omni points', the translator doesn't fall short of other Qidian translators. I rewrote some entire parts to intensify the story as well as fight scenes to make the story better on my own discretion, but if the translator doesn't want to it's his decision. The editing is horrible though, if there's one thing Qidian needs it's better editors. Multiple typos, spelling mistakes and one out of every two sentences was badly phrased. Translation would've been 3.5/5 if it weren't for editor. So tempted to join Qidian as an editor. Stability of Updates: 5/5, since it's Qidian. I mean, duh.Story Development: 5/5. One of the best Litrpg/Magic novels, and the plot certainly isn't cliche.Character Design: Uh this is a CN novel so you obviously don't have character development. But the personalities of the various characters do remain consistent so a solid 3/5. World Background:4/5. It does well on world-building too though it doesn't focus on that aspect. This novel has a good author.
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Honestly when i first read the novel, i was expecting something like xianxia: ##### series, but i was in for a surprise, this book is great, cant wait for more.
This story has a similar premise to how we've seen before of VRMMOs and the journey of a hero through it. There's enough of a mystery there to keep you reading while also making the world of the VRMMO interesting enough that you want to learn more. The characters have plenty of room to grow, which is good for a story. Can't wait to see more as it comes out.
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