The kind of MC who always got bullied whenever he went, even his parents as well, barely had any friend in school, and always thought himself as a useless being for being born with such a lowly power... compared to others who shot flame, blizzard, thunder and poison from their hands... his Charm wouldn't do much but to max the charisma point in the S.P.E.C.I.A.L points.Or is that so? Anyway, did you noticed that I use mostly past tense for the paragraph above? Well, I wouldn't like to spoil you more, because the satisfaction when the MC finally able to [REDACTED] those bullies... well, you wouldn't be that satisfied knowing [REDACTED]. Definitely worth to read and watch the MC do tons of [REDACTED] with his true power.Then, about the writing... it's clear and vivid, less ambiguous, telling the surrounding and what the character think and do, especially with the first person perspective, making it more easy to follow and understand of what happened.Then there's the dialogue. The dialogue is clearly the strongest point of this stort. Every dialogue sound different to each character---that sense from the annoying brads, the archetype of scaredy-cat persons, etc---giving them rich timbre (or tone color in musical term for rich-sounding music or dialogues in this case).The plot, I have nothing to say anymore as you must read it for yourself to get that sense of "take that, b****!"-ish.About pacing, well I think it's a bit rushing (at least in my standard) in the beginning of chapter when the MC had yet to found his true nature. Hoping to see his past being told as a miserable human, just to see him "return the favour" later on. Well no matter, the story development itself already alright, and I truly enjoy reading it.About grammar, no comment on that, since I'm not native speaker, and you seemed did a better job than me.With that being said, I guess that's all...Lastly but not least, I'd like to thank to the Author who keeps updating and writing this good story for us.Thank you... ^^Keep on writing~
The amouth of false votes is amazing or there are 6000 stupid a out there, the novel is waaaay overrated, while the translation quality and speed is nice the rest is avarage at best, the world building is confusing as fuk, and the character development a mess
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Very good; will do a better review when the story gets further. MC's character is blah tbh; the other characters make this story shine otherwise I would think its just so so. Author clearly has a knack for making random side characters feel human which is great; when they are actually involved in the storyline and Chens background hah Wish it had more depth and perspective. Less ridiculous and realistic; y'know more tragedy, failure and worldbuilding. Almost a 100 chapters and all I know is the planets name. Last bits just my opinion lol
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The book is a continuation witch seems to be just as good as the first book, however I would like to see more interesting situations happen in this new book.Furthermore I hope that references will be made between the two books as both series continue as it would be cool for the fans to see those.But overall I’m really looking forward to this book as it seems to have lots of potential to be even better than the first book up to the point that I have read for each of them.Thanks for the series/chapter :) ~E
God I love this novel. I only have 2 problems with it. 1) the update stability needs to be improved. For example 20 powerstones = 1 extra chapter or 4 chapters weekly while the remaining for editing and story planning . The schedule could look like Mon-Thurs writing Fri-Sat story planning and Sunday for editing. This leads into numero doux. Writing quality. Honestly it isn't that bad but it could still be greatly improved.
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