Good premise for a story. OP does his homework, this much is obvious.That being said, this story is in need of context. I feel like I get 60% of the story... I want the other 40% that is trapped in OPs head.
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It’s not a bad story but honestly it’s suffering from two things. The pacing and the MC being not a character. The pacing does get better but MC personally is just not there. She might have had a better personality then she was emotionless. Again, it’s not a bad story just not for me.
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