Eternal Ascent : The legend of kaelion

make it short please!

It’s trash.                                                                                                                                

I don't mind the fact that this novel is unoriginal. What I do mind is how poorly executed it is. The translations are below average (with a chapter missing at around CH 18) and the lack of care put in the story, characters and worldbuilding doesn't do a good job at selling a compelling anything really.I know what this novel is trying to do. It's trying to be the sort of novel where the reader doesn't need to think too much about the intricacies of the story, characters and world but instead just turn their brain off and enjoy. The sort of novel where the author is almost always making this up on the spot as he writes without thinking ahead much (if at all). That's an ok concept, it's popular and it can be done well.Unfortunately this author just isn't very good at it. The cheat is overpowered but boring and meaningless, theres really nothing enjoyable about this series, it's a struggle to care about any developments in the story or characters. Insultingly soulless, low quality stuff. 1/5.

Di update lagi gan, ditunggu kelanjutannya,..... Berharap tidak putus ditengah jalan .... . Jadi penasaran kelanjutannya ...... Mantap jiwa,.........

Bow female = give us some time to learn and look at our skills tree than we fight any monster you want.

My name is Red Lorenzo. Red for short, and Gwapo for shorter. Bahala na kayo kung anong gusto niyong itawag sa akin, pero mas gusto ko yung Gwapo. Ako lang naman ang pinakagwapong tao sa buong mundo.

Next morning Joshua woke up early in the morning to cook breakfast. Changing his clothes he descent to the first floor, he heard an arguing debate.

His eyes drank in my exposed body before resuming to kissing my neck.