Writing Quality: It's too good to be true. The grammars are good too. It had a very detailed information at the same time it won't make you feel bored at all. Story Development: The main story line development have a good pace (not too slow and not too fast). Well except for the Romantic relationship of the MC, its too fast I guess. But overall the story development is good.Character Design: I say the characters are too normal but its not that bad considering the story is still young. I'm looking forward to the Character development especially the MCUpdating Stability: Its alright and its understandable considering the situation of the author. World Background: This has a lot of potential.Overall: The story is great and I'll support it. ps. sorry I'm not that good in writing a review.
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Ok , i think i read enough chapters to give this novel a review...300+ chapters First of all i must say author has a creative mind and new ideas will come to his mind and he puts them in his story but sadly it's also has a downside for author because of it he can't focus on one or two stories he writes many novels as soon as he got a nice idea, well it's a mistake that new writers do you can't find a pro author to focus all his attention to more than 2 works...well as i said because of it the quality of his writing is getting a little bad and you will find many mistakes in story from misspellings to forgetting some minor things in story like the age restrictions of a tournament or the number of poison pills MC created etc...The next important matter is that even thought this novel has romance Tag ,you can't find a proper romance relationship building between characters only MC teasing Xun time to times while other girls get few talking with him and few lewd scenes (every 50+ chapters π )(for R-18 scenes even if author doesn't want to write it continuously , sometimes just mentioning that they had a passionate night is enough when they go to sleep in their rooms)The same goes for Harem Tag ... when you combine Harem and romance Tags together you expect to get lovey dovey scenes and some normal chapters about their interactions and romantic moments to make their relationships bound stronger otherwise it'll become like those weird Chinese cultivation novels which MC has 99% of his mind about getting stronger and how to cultivate and 1% of his mind remind him he also has some women around the world πI think the cause of it is at the beginning of this novel when few readers called MC a skirt chaser which scared the author and impacted the love part of the story...sadly. BUT on the other hand MC is ruthless which i like, and becoming a demon slowly well a person who will become a demon for the sake of his family not a brain dead evil demon who keeps killing for fun (hopefully it stay the same till the end)And in this novel we have many characters and places and empires etc but sadly it doesn't have a glossary about it so be prepare to forget some info in journey of reading this novel. And lastly if you want to read about a ruthless MC read this one but I'm not sure about the romance and Harem part cuz it's not developed properly yet after all this time......- Writing quality: 7/10- Stability of update: 10/10- World background: 7/10- Ruthless mc: 8/10- Harem relationships building: 6/10- Romance: 5/10- Characters design: 7/10
So the reason for the lower star rating is because everything is so rushed in the story (stopped at chapter 40) and the chapters are all very short. I read up to chapter 40 in around 2-3 hours. he is apparently 89 years old but acts like a child even though psychologically it is not really possible to revert to such a mindset after 89 years. also the reason for the main villain is rediculous. like who ruins a friendship over one online death. I've killed my friends hundreds of times across hundreds of games but we still are bros
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