This novel has gone beyond all my expectations for it and continues to amaze me. There isn’t a thing I would change about it. Keep up the fantastic work and work!
(Sorry for my English, but it's not my native language)In general it is a good novel, but there are several things that I do not like. I know it has a slow development, but it is too much. In other novels the MC would have already accepted that he is no longer in his world and that now he needs to learn a new common sense, instead of meddling in annoying matters. For this there would be a small event that would encourage him to improve, but in this novel he just takes it back, making the story heavier because it can feel repetitive. I mean, there were already several things that would have made a normal person seriously rethink whether with a normal mentality they could survive, but in this case the MC prefers to stay the same thinking that everything is going to change without him doing something. I can bear that at first he is a fearful crybaby, but that at this point he has not gotten angry one bit with the cause of everything is an idiot, honestly. I understand that he represses himself, but unless it is Gandhi, I do not understand why he does not have a bit of violent reactions to several important things and only worries about small things. These are all the complaints that I have managed to find so far, if I have more I will leave them in the comments.
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It's a fast paced love horror novel. by the end of chapter one you'll already hit bit of a dark point where the guy is basically in a difficult spot. I recommend reading this if you're in need of seeing people die.
É uma história muito bem construída, apesar de bastante cruel, com certeza um prato cheio para quem gosta de fantasia pós-apocalíptica, Espero que o prosseguimento da história não me decepcione
Then there were her memories from long ago, of Mrs. Bun-bun actually talking to her…and that terrible Christmas when Brenda's brother Jack, which was something she avoided remembering, the same way you avoided poking at a tooth which ached.
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