One of the most interesting book i ve ever read. 3d characters,amazing plot , indepth world building, no youngmasters and cck suckin bitches and finally a cunning mc in flesh ,not like the ****tynovels who start with saying smart mc but being an ass later . The only thing i feel it lack is the character interaction between mc and the lover. Relationship is a give and take thingy. Until now i ve only seen mc giving and caring while alina being a ***** many times, maybe it will change. Overall its goddamn good!!!!
truly one of the very few stories that got me hooked instantly , and now i can't wait for the next chapters to come out;
i've always felt that the usual stories are petty restricted in the enviroment , systeme of developpement and so on, now THIS is real dimentional transfer, and i have that felling that **** just got real, and the plot is just about to start after this arc, can't wait. much love,
best story so far (personal view)
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the MC is garbage, he acts like a complete doormat and has pretty much no solid personality to speak of, his so called "companions" are just a ****ty fairy that treats him like crap and like the slave he is, while dodging any consequences and in fact getting rewarded for being ****ty, and a "sidekick" that's constantly getting influenced by the fairy to also treat him like ****. neither of their actions ever seem consistent or coherent and the fact that we're basically forced to watch this wimpy MC getting used for labor gets really old really fast. ALSO, his supposed "guide" consistently hides or conceals information and useful things from him simply because she "can" or because she's scheming behind his back. of course, the MC can or wont do anything about this so whats the point in reading this novel about a worthless character no one cares about being abused by other worthless characters no one else cares about.
loved the first novel because it was different and new and provided a fresh fun novel. this novel takes many of the best parts and is great just hope the first novel has less attention because of it
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i've always felt that the usual stories are petty restricted in the enviroment , systeme of developpement and so on, now THIS is real dimentional transfer, and i have that felling that **** just got real, and the plot is just about to start after this arc, can't wait. much love,
best story so far (personal view)
Typical good MC that want to save people even if he may die (hero-complex).
Can't even kill people just because they had a bad past or were influeced by others.
Dont even want to sacrifice other people for himself, Im starting to get annoyed to all this 'good' annoying MC that don't even have a little of pride
This is my second novel in this platform, and I feel fairly confident about my writing quality.
So guys, feel free to enjoy this novel of mine!
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