Embracing love

The blatant power stone botting and lack of any sort of originality with this story is appalling. Its the standard copy-paste cheap novel that often gets translated from Chinese authors. I honestly dont understand why webnovel allows this garbage to ruin their site's reputation.

*sigh* why do these authers always copy each other and not adding anything unique. Also the description tells me almost nothing about the story. Can you make two descriptions one cryptic and non informative and another with actual background info

Western name Clive in a Chinese environment. Didn't even read through chapter one and I gave up lol. Mc name Clive but he studies in zhenyang(?) school or something. So yeah, it's a pass for me.Correct me if I'm wrong, like if the author actually explain why he is called Clive instead of a chinese name. A backstory or something else ..

The overall story was alright. Just alright. Nothing really notable. The path of revenge, but it makes you feel rather, made me feel not satisfying at all. Even with 1000 years of life experience going through blood shed, betrayal, and feeling the intent of death during the MC years, you really can tell he does not act like his true age at all, so rather than a thousand years the age would make more sense of his true age being about 30, maybe even less. Rather weird to be honest as I read, granted I stopped at chapter 80 I believe as I just left it at that, getting some of his revenge was not satisfying towards the reader. Don't get me wrong I am not attacking the author, he writes well, grammer is good, but the ultimate premise of the story as a whole just feels like an empty shell that does not give you any reward on to reading any further. When getting the so called "slaves" for his revenge, the writing makes you feel  bland, if you came for r-18 there is hardly any in the beginning as the author just skips the scenes but puts other character scenes in? Weird right? Anyway later at the end it starts to be picked up in the category for the MC, if your coming for revenge its Fine. I recommend reading a couple chapters first to get your views on this book.  These are my thoughts and opinions on this book, not the worst I read but will easily be blotted out in time...

This novel is definitely a page turner! The way the author paints a picture in our minds is absolutely amazing. I was able to imagine everything perfectly. This story is written perfectly and is definitely a must read!

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The story was about the do-over of the MC. A captivating plot that made me touched by the storyline itself. This is something that many of us relate to. Wanting to restart again to correct or not do again caused our regrets. Story development at its finest. Five stars!

Love it man keep up the good work just please update more frequently please I'm bagging you