Great job I’m really enjoying the story so far especially the un charisma stat that glows him up. Keep up the good work, nice job on the steady updates, would love more even more to read
The writing is simple and somewhat easy to understand, comprehend, and imagine. Some sentences are long and take a lot of breath to read... but not bad and good overall.
I really like the character. He ACTUALLY THINKS, unlike some other novels that have characters with huge gaps in intelligence (I hate MCs with no common sense and intelligence. Can't say anything about the stability of updates since I don't know how often the story is updated. World design is based on our world with no gaps in logic (I think) for now. Just hoping you can update for more chapters. P.S. Just a thought, but can't he buy or like rent mercenaries or slaves with loyalty to him from the system? It sounds like a cool idea to me...
It is good, but suffers from many odd mistakes, most of which, are about the mc. He comes to the past with 30 years of knowledge about the game, but barely remembers about how to kill an undead. The combat is worse though. He literally slams a cleaver into a guy's head and he doesnt die, resulting in the MC taking a hit and having to stab him in the heart. This was a fight with an untrained bandit. The fights are slow, resulting in paragraphs of a single fight with a struggling MC. Literally 30 years of combat experience and nothing to show for it besides above average skills, not even that good. It starts amazing, but progressively loses its features.
I hope you can update the chapters quickly. I really enjoyed the flow and characters of the story. But it's been a few days and yet there are no updates. I'm becoming dissapointed.
Schroeder pulls the reins on his horse to stop its hooves, "The academy teachings will get you killed man. In battle you must remember your training, but you must think for yourself. Screw the empire and our people. What matters is your, our survival. You're my eyes and ears on this mission."
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