ok as much as I like dumb and corny mcs this take it to the top, like the dude is buggy but 10 times dumber and cringy. to the point where reading this becomes uncomfortable and not enjoyably.this needs heavy rewriting where the unnecessary paragraphs and sentences needs to be ommited in my opinion.and if you move your story you will get more readers.
PURE POISON.I don't understand why would people vote for this.This novel will literally destroy all your brain cell within 10 chapters. I don't understand what the purpose of the story is. Why is this even a novel. There's nothing in this story except Faces slapping, Faces slapping and Faces slapping.I literally almost pulled out my hairs while reading till 10th Chapter. And I will never recommend such worst novels.I am very disappointed in Webnovel. There used to be great novels and Fanfics and now it's progressing backward. I feel that if Webnovel doesn't change now, it will become another app like Wattpad, just with novels filled with locked chapters.
Okay, it’s not like I’m being ruthless, it’s just... a mess. I’m usually very accepting of novel ideas, but this is just a terrible assortment. Can’t make any sense of it, at first you can still enjoy it but it just keeps getting more and more out of hand. It’s the first time I felt that the author had absolutely no plan for the novel and just kept throwing in ideas as they came and hope that they fit together. Well, they don’t. I’m really disappointed because this actually had potential. The characters at least are reasonable. Oh well, some people have said that this is a good novel to pass the time while you wait for updates on your favourite novel, but for me it’s just a waste of time, you’ll end up feeling disappointed and frustrated when you drop it.Enough said, it’s just my opinion. Hope some people can still enjoy it.
Eh, en la novela hacen muchos chistes que no entenderían los que no son de China, a la traducción no es satisfactoria, el ritmo hace esto un poco aburrido, no se presentan ocasiones interesante.....eh, una pregunta ¿por qué siempre el mejor amigo del mc es siempre gordo?, solo por curiosidad...en fin no la recomiendo.....
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