I was expecting more character development before the protagonist’s easy win. The main character had no police/law enforcement/ forensic training before transmigrating with a detective system golden finger. In the first case, the golden finger replayed the whole murder before the protagonist put in any effort. Then, his boss agreed to arrest the suspect with out a warrant or any direct evidence in hand (Cultureal Differences?). I would have preferred if the system only told him that a murder occurred and then forced the protagonist to solve the rest himself. Bottom line the protagonist’s golden finger made him look cool to other characters but did not cause any personal growth.
Ridiculously greedy translator and can't even admit it. Leaves ww to come here for more money then switches over to premium for more money with the excuse of giving more back to the author. Like anyone believes that mess. If that was the case why not set up something to directly donate towards the author but no you just want a bigger piece of pie. Not to mention how many ranks this novel jumped after going premium.
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Alright, this novel is gutsy and ambitious. Three entirely different storylines of different genres meshed together incredibly well using that one demon lord.Seriously, I was scared for this one. I thought the stories would clash, and that there would be tonal clashes and clashes for which story takes the spotlight.But this goddamned author pulled it off.And he pulled it off to an extent I've seriously only seen in published books.Alright, yeah, so if you, the person reading the review, hasn't cought on to the fact that I love this book and that this is just going to be me gushing all over it, then let me make it clear.I LOVE this book.The writing is phenomenal. It's set on Earth and I'd say it's a pretty solid planet as far as word building goes.It seems to be very well researched. I can't elaborate on this point really because I haven't had much experience with the character and location and customs settings present in this book, and as a typical Webnovel reader I'm too lazy to cross reference it against stuff, but yeah it feels really well researched.The writing style is great. The flow and pace just fits the story like a glove. It's introspective in the best of ways. It's just great, yeah? There's some occasional spelling issues I've come across but c'mon, that's still leagues better than any Webnovel I've seen on here.The characters oooh boy the characters I love em to bits. Character development and growth is on point. Characters are all hella likable. They are characteristic of how much effort went into this book and how much I love it.Alright, I'll close this off by saying a couple more things sike this brain isn't going to let me stop gushing so soon-a) It's great.b) I love it.c) Yes it does have quite a bit of LGBTQ rep and boy do the characters gain depth due to the societal impacts of that, but it's not the focus of the book.d) I need more chapterse) Hey almost daily uploads would you look at that thank you authorf) I have no clue why I'm still doing this.7) I will not apologise for any time wasted on reading this 'review'
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