The foundation for this story is incredibly weak. It’s supposed to be a sci-fi world, but none of these elements are focused on. It’s written like it’s modern-day instead with weird sci-fi gates thrown into the mix. The MC is supposed to be in a planet larger than Earth, but no explanation about the gravity or geography are given. It’s briefly mentioned that people had to move underground, but then this idea has yet to be mentioned again. Why didn’t they try to block the portals? Why didn’t they move off the planet? What other strategies have been used aside from fighting against the monsters like barbarians? If a single beast card is worth so much money but this world isn’t as dangerous as it’s made out to be, then why hasn’t the economy collapsed? Given how easy it appears, becoming a billionaire is an easy dream. The info about beast cards comes in an info dump in the first chapter, but it has numerous plot holes and unanswered questions. Furthermore, it never explains the meaning of the stats the MC sees for each beast.Characterization is weak. The MC is an insensible jerk who throws caution to the wind and lives by luck alone. No explanations are given about why the wild beasts only attack his beasts and never attack him, even though he’s clearly weaker. No depth is given to him or any other characters. He doesn’t show any gratitude and even attacks a beast that saved him, giving me no reason to feel any respect for his shallow personality. He isn’t even slightly likeable. The cool chick the MC disdains is likeable, even if she's clingy, but he's not very nice to her.This series is inconsistent with far more weaknesses than strengths. It’s written like a bad imitation of certain other series, but it doesn’t string together the logic or plot hardly at all. Not recommended.
You would think this is a story about what's started happening now that the 800 years are over, but no. This is a story about all 800 years of cultivating. Staring the MC sitting around and doing NOTHING for 800 years. Also staring a bunch of random people wandering near the MC and getting struck by lightning, lol.
This Novel had so much potential but was ruined by every character that isn’t an ally of the MC. Nobody uses their brain unless they’re on the MC’s side.Every character is his enemy as well, haven’t seen a single neutral character yet except a clan leader but that’s the minimum he’s 400 years old. Everyone else just slanders the MC and basically 20% of the dialogue of this novel (free chapters) is just random characters insulting the MC for no apparent reason at all, (6 Year old MC btw) (he’s not even 6 yet but that just makes it worse) Anyways, unless someone tells me this nonsense stops I can’t bring myself to pay just to read something that is clearly triggering me….
Honestly cant say it how good this story is although its slow spaced for some i think it’s prefectly set as the author puts a lot of effort into each chapter they give details Into the characters and world they are in and give deep to each of the characters giving them emotions and feeling that you dont see many other authors give
Amazing work from the writer here. It's been a long time since I read a story like this and I love it. I love the creativity and everything about the book. Keep it up.
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