Eclipse Love

Mana: None

she smirked and did a hand sign "kai" a puff of smoke appeared and   in naruto's place was a women more specifilly an anbu captain the first anbu captain that  ever existed

this i could handle. smiling the warmest, most sincere smile i could muster, i caught the eyes of as many people as i could, and though a few smiled back, i felt good about it.

"udaaah sana"

Main quest: Reach your first Mortal grade. Reward: Wizard Tower.

"This servant will now report to the main hall. Thank you for your grace"

I read till chpter 119. I have given this novel plenty of chances despite the rough beggining. The early plots were just the same as one novel i read before i think it ws i will kill the author. Despite this i gave it a shot as i wanted to see where this would go next. I was quite relieved that it was a good one since the mc was calm and smart. He was dense as a japanese beta mc thugh despite the author giving him background of having past relationships. But what ticked me off the most was the forced plot of character development. The authour wuld pull some bs reasons why the mc lost to the rank 2 and if that wasnt enough development he would beat him and lose to the rank one with another bs that the rank 1 awakened his second gift. Also the girls were somehow interested in him from the start with the reason of hes interesting well hes really not he was the weakest in the rank A class but somehow hes the point of interest. I would understand it nore if he was noticed after the fact of being promoted in rank faster than them. I especially hate the heroine Cecilia whose supposedly a sociopath that keeps fking with the mc. Overall, the plot in the beggining was ok even though it had similarities with the other novel and the flow of the pacing was great. The characters felt alive with each having thier on unique emotions sometimes getting along to each other and fighting when teasing one another. Ghe only problem I had was the forced plots for character development of the MC. Im sure it could have been done better the reasoning behind it was so unreasonable. Dont even get me started about the cringe speeches his friends gave him after he lost it felt so forced and out of place. On the other hand im also not a fan of having multiple entities behind the scenes manipulating the mc, one of which erased his fking memory when he got a gift and they were never mentioned again.

Very well written. Very relaxing. keep going writer